Avalon - Chapter 65 - The Birds
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Tyler T
Still can’t read this chapter. WTF
odzoo
I think Tom had skid marks in his shorts at the end of the chapter.
odzoo
These edits are included in the doc in # editorial. Please continue to post what you notice. I occasionally find something I missed in these comments. Thank you.
Tyler T
Every time I try to read this chapter, it says service unavailable
Hannibal St.Michael
A grouping of eagles is called a convocation or an aerie. Why didn't add the snitch to the aerie? Great chapter by the way. I feel this part of the story might be wrapping up in less than 5 chapters.
Brent Barclay
Minor correction for when it's uploaded, "darkening sky. “And I is going to kill me for"" And I to Andi I just grabbed a few words around it so you can find it Second one "You think he will him" Pretty sure you meant to have to have it be "you think he will kill him"
Ryan
I'm a sucker for a good Blood Eagle
The Humble CTurtle
So good dude. I love it when a plan comes together. Love the ruthlessness and planning by Harry.
Fallou Amar
The build up is crazy. Great story!
SmittyBoi
There ain't no eagle like a blood eagle!
Tony
"The Birds" uh-oh, Lee's entered his Hitchcock phase!