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Avalon - Chapter 19 - Hollow

🕑 Added 2024-09-05 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Markus Antonius

It feels weird reading a King Arthur story and he’s not from Wales

AlexanderR

Why is that Myrddin's attempt to end the affair only involve Guinevere? Why not obliviate or kill Lancelot? Myrddin doesn't seem like he would be above that.

Hannibal St.Michael

It doesn't feel right that the only person to really set Myrddin on the back foot thus far is the cheating spouse. And does Guinevere's prophesy sound a little close to Cersei's to anyone else?

Sunny

Great chapter! Beyond this, I'm know you have other ideas, but have you considered changing it up, specifically going with a different MC? I think you could easily write a story from the POV of Albus, Gellert or Tom, i.e. someone that's a powerhouse of the wizarding world. Alternatively, it'd be cool if u wrote a Marauder era fic from a James/Sirius/Remus/Lily/Snape POV. Or even a next gen fic (your take on cursed child) or an Original Character. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next

Deep Tewari

God I’m loving Avalon. I’m picturing myrrdin Arthur and Morgana from the cast of Merlin and it feels like I’m living out the story in my head

Sammy the Shark

As someone who abhors cheating, Guinevere has always been one of my least favorite aspects of Arthurian Legend. It makes my insides clench with anger and sadness at the same time. The idea of being unfaithful to someone….yeah not a fan. Good chapter otherwise, just that interaction with Myrddin, even tho he’s an asshole in this story, I was firmly on his side.

Dave

The ‘Come Death, come” made me so happy and excited! I just love all your work, absolutely brilliant.

James Shay

Come, death, come

Joe Schumacher

Great chapter as usual. I am confused however, about how this is the first time he got close enough to the church to feel the magic. His first trip outside the castle came here. I can understand not lingering, but it seems like a long trip to do nothing there, especially after Harry had the vision. No tour at all? I freely admit that is a nitpick, that just jumped out at me. Keep up the great work!

TheSerpent

Thinking of Morgana is all well and good so lomng as it does not drive him to distraction and make him lose focus...he has had that problem in the past

Sam Payne

I... yes... I was being sarcastic/attempted humorous... hence the several m's and long trail of dots

TheSerpent

Plus he does tend to crossover certain stuff from other fics with others on occasion. Seems more to me that he is creating a multiverse of sorts with variations of Harry in each, heck we already seen two Harry's from different times or universes collide in All For You when Harry as Harry Jameson crossed paths with Harry Evans from the When Roses Bloom Again timeline cept was a different Harry Evans than the one we read about in When Roses Bloom Again.