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Avalon - Chapter 10 - Pursuit
🕑 Added 2024-08-04 13:00:08 +0000 UTCThe adventure continues...
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The Humble CTurtle
Lol fair enough. I'm sure I've missed similar instances of a word out of time. This one just seemed to catch my attention and pull me out of the scene.
Matthew
If he was using era appropriate language, we wouldn’t be able to understand a thing.
Sunny
I hope the extent of Harry's horcrux absorption is being a parselmouth and nothing more. Anyway, this story has been pretty gd so far and I've enjoyed how you've written the other characters, like the founders, Morgana, Merlin & Arthur. Thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next one.
The Humble CTurtle
Just a small thing I noticed. Castor says the word 'fallout' when discussing the you-know-what. That word would not have existed during that time.
Hannibal St.Michael
Firstly, aren't there cushioning charms or maybe specific charms to help make horse riding more bearable. I'm surprised in that day and age that Wizards wouldn't know them. Godric's Hollow was a surprise destination, that's going to shake Harry up, I think. Thanks for the update.
AlexanderR
This can become the story of Harry and Godric traveling around Britain. I'm loving it, and I'm all for it.
