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Whispers of a Raven - DEATH!

🕑 Added 2021-08-08 21:52:26 +0000 UTC

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Shadowsmage

great story!

elisabetta violi

I really liked your story, but honestly I'm waiting for the epilogue to reread it entirely. I'm a big fan of Arcturus and Charlus, I also like Cassiopeia (which I hope to see again soon) :)

Dennis Seeger

Another great story! I have enjoyed everything you have written and I have only found two other fanfiction authors that rival you. I am not sure how you get authors onto your podcasts, but if you haven’t done so yet reach out to MarauderLover7-author of the Innocent series and Holt9364/Mort623 husband and wife coauthors of the 8th Year series. The 4 of you are the authors that I continually eagerly await new updates and reread all of your stories on a regular basis. On that note I am looking forward to the epilogue for this story and the beginning of your Harry/Minerva story

Clephne

God damn, the confrontation between the two sisters was epic, but nothing could equal the setting of Tom's death it was amazing! I can't wait for the epilogue and your next tale!

prithvi raj

Kinda underwhelming the ending, too much left to do. I feel that the potential of this story has not been reached. It maybe requires more than the epilogue like the “The stepping back” story. Hope you continue it.

Relyks

Always love reading a good quidditch match and that was a good one. Loved the sportsmanship too! The ending was great, however, I was a little disappointed that Harry killed both versions of Voldemort by ripping his heart out. It was awesome the first time he did it, but it didn’t seem to fit as well the second time. Still it was an amazing read and can’t wait to read your Harry/Minnerva story next as I’ve never read that pairing. Thank you for this piece of fanfiction!

Jon Patreon

Honestly, I'm glad this story is over. It started well but quickly turned into a crackfic. A good crackfic but a crackfic nonetheless. Harry never really seemed to overcome any hurdles. He was weakish and sort of beat Tom, the he got mystically levelled up and beat him easily. No-one of any significance on his side died. He never had to take any risks. He had a plan, he executed it and it worked flawlessly like his quidditch. I also hope the Blacks feature less in your next fic. I know they're your brand but there's only so many times Arcturus can be super respected and pwn the Wizengamot. It was quite a creative fic though, nice to see Harry/Narcissa and the professorial and quidditchy bits were good. Overall, probably an 8/10.

ck

Brilliant ending, I only realized at the end that Harry was toying with Voldemort to give Corvus enough time to get the cup from the vault. I somewhat disliked Narcissa in this fic for several reasons, the latest being her insistence on being the one to fight Bellatrix (after being the reason Bella wasn't buried already by Harry) even though Harry was much more powerful, when she should've thought of Helena first. I'm still glad she managed to take care of Bellatrix without making Harry worry for her safety and thus distract him from his fight. I noticed an error on p20 where it says "when you're done playing for the Magpies". I thought he was playing for the Falcons.

Nick Coffey

Good ending. I would love to see some visuals for that final battle, that final form of Death/Harry could look epic

John Brown

A great ending and I am looking forward to the next fic and I have few suggestions for it. First, till this point in all your stories, your Voldemort has been quite one dimensional with him just wanting to kill muggleborns left and right and him wanting to make a pure blood society(even though he doesn’t believe in it) and him being mad because of the hocruxes but in the next one Harry would be sent back in the WW2 era when grindlewald was still in power and so I want to see a more political story because most wars are not just many battles or a single person going and just deciding what should be done and most people on the ‘wrong’ side have more thought than just wanting to kill the other people, it’s because of many different reasons and conditions that make them do stuff and join a dark lord to take a real example people didn’t just randomly follow Hitler he was charismatic and there were a lot of factors contributing to his rise to power ,no leader can be one dimensional like that and so people just following Voldemort because of blood purity makes little sense yes some fanatics would but not that many people are fanatics. So ,what I am trying to say is expand a bit on the background and write a more detailed story like Prince of Slytherin and if you could don’t make it a Harry/Minerva pairing it’s just creepy to have those two together. Good luck with the next one and knowing you I am sure it would be awesome :) .

mchlrx

This was probably my favourite story of yours and I can’t wait to see what you will come up with next! I was however slightly disappointed that half of this chapter wasn’t really relevant to the main Storyline. It just feels kind of weird that the Quidditch match was (at least it felt that way) longer than the final confrontation 😅. Overall a really brilliant story and possibly my favourite fic overall, but this chapter kind of let me down a bit. I hope that this doesn’t sound ungrateful but I’m always a fan of constructive criticism 😊. Looking forward to your future projects!!!

Moe

Excellent...

thevolunteer

Excellent. This isn’t the story I voted for in the beginning, but it is the one I have come to enjoy the second most of all of your stories. Eagerly awaiting the epilogue and next story.

Rick Malone

A great finale to an engaging story. I just want to thank you for your consistency and quality; waiting for your chapters to post is a highlight of my week.