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All For You - Prologue

🕑 Added 2023-11-01 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Maxim Michtchenko

Really cool, looking forward to the full story

Gabrielle Commins

Wow, really good so far! can't wait to read more!

Stephen P McCann

Nice start. Would love to see winter rose be posted regularly too πŸ™

Thor

Great start

Sunny

Harry's very judgy isn't he so far, hahaha? Also, are the characterizations of Ron, Ginny & the Wizarding World just for the purposes of this story. It seems a little unfair to simply bash them. While not perfect, I feel Ron & Hermione balance each other out and I doubt Ron would be petty - after everything they've been through - that he didn't take the same job as him. With Ginny, while it's all too convenient by JK, there's nothing really wrong with her to suggest she was needy and I kinda blame JK for not bringing her in more with the trio after like year 3, cause most people thought he'd end up with Hermione. Anyway, I liked how skipped the initial rocky training montage, cause we've all seen it, and I the Fawkes time travel thing was new. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.


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