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A Flower for the Soul - The First Task

🕑 Added 2020-12-05 23:24:38 +0000 UTC

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Logan

Another great chapter, enjoyed Harry’s method in the first task. Enjoying the delacour’s as well.

HeroOfAll

Great chapter. Love the utilization of magic in this chapter, and makes sense Harry, even as cold as he is with his occlumency skills, is not immune because still in puberty especially.

AIP_Alexander

Great chapter! I don't think I've seen any other author use runes for the first task the same way before, so kudos on finding a unique method. I also loved the part on elemental magic. If I ever decide to write my own fanfic I would probably incorporate elemental magic and give magical creatures a bigger role in the story. Think about it, a wampus cat can do legilimency, a hidebehind can turn invisible, and a horned serpent's jewel is said to be capable of flight. What if wizards originally picked up those skills from them, and what's keeping them from learning from them directly now?

Brenden Cowell

Thank you for not making Harry mysteriously immune to the Veela allure, much more interesting that he struggles a little bit. Excellent job progressing the characters slowly, and taking into account that very few would accept Sirius’ exoneration immediately.

Victory For The People

Fantastic, and everything I was hoping for. Elemental magic the likes of which we only get a taste of in canon in the 5th book.. Keep up the great work!

Erinnyes

Awesome chapter, the description of how Harry tackled the task was just awesome. You've done a great job making him extremely skilled without relying on the Naruto-esque "Throw mountains of power at the problem until it goes away" trope. Sebastien and Appoline are both great characters and feel like real beings. Thoroughly enjoying everything here, and am extremely impressed with your pace. 🙂