Torsten Hewson
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v2c62: Wayward Companion
🕑 Added 2021-09-13 23:55:21 +0000 UTCThe meeting with the Elders had gone on for longer than Xiulan would have liked. After the discussion of the tournament, they had moved on to sampling the syrup… which was a bit amusing, when her Honourable Father had groaned with pleasure.
It appeared they had something amusing in common. Though his was more a deep grumble of contentment rather than her… rather undignified sounds.
Senior Sister said it was endearing, but Xiulan still tried to keep a tight grip on it.
“I think this concludes all that needs to be spoken of.” her father stated.
The rest of the Elders nodded.
“Then this meeting is adjourned. Tomorrow, we shall make the name “Verdant Blade” Resound throughout the Azure Hills once more.”
The elders nodded, smirks and satisfied smiles upon their faces.
The meeting was adjourned, and Xiulan was dismissed.
She walked out of the building, thinking upon what had transpired. She would likely be made an Elder for this, but Elder Yi was a bit concerning. Should she bring her friends to her Sect’s manor here?
“Senior Sister?”
She was started from her introspection by a hopeful voice. She raised her head to gaze upon familiar face.
An Ran, one of the disciples that she had personally taught. Behind her stood several others. Those chosen for the tournament…. And most of them were her once-students.
She felt a small welling of pride at that. They had taken what she had said to heart, and focused on improving themselves.
“Junior Sister, it is good to see you.” She complimented. “To see you all in good spirits is a blessing.”
The disciples perked up at her words, relief flooding them.
“We just wished to welcome you back, Senior Sister. And thank you for your guidance.”
To think that she had been annoyed training them. What sort of teacher would be angry about eager students?
Perhaps it was from the looks they were giving her, so full of awe and pride. She believed she hadn’t deserved it. Had not warranted their admiration.
But now.. Their eyes did not make her feel bile climbing her throat. Instead, she felt calm.
Xiulan smiled at them, and there was a little intake of breath. The meeting had gone on for a while…. But there was still time.
“Thank you for greeting me, Junior Brothers and Sisters. I’m honoured to have such diligent Juniors. Would you do me the honour of showing me how far you’ve grown?”
The junior disciples brightened, and fairly scrambled to get their swords, as she awaited them in the arena.
And so their bouts began.
But.. in all of them, there was an undercurrent of tension, and a bit of a lack of focus. Worry, nervousness, all of it was upon their minds.
They were happy to see her, yet tense, and unfocused.
So she rectified that.
A sword clattered to the ground.
“You have improved, An Ran.” Xiulan complemented. “The holes in your defence have closed, and your increasing skill shows your diligence.”
“Thank you for your pointers, Senior Sister!” The girl shouted, bowing to her.
She stared around the ring at the hopeful disciples “All of you have grown. Be proud of your accomplishments.”
The disciples smiled at each other.
“Senior Sister, do you have any advice for us?” One of the male students asked. His voice was nervous.
“Go into this tournament with your mind upon your future growth, rather than your current limitations. This tournament is but another lesson, and what you learn from it is the true prize.”
The disciples nodded their gazes considering. A bit of strange advice, rather than “show the sect’s strength”, she supposed.
But.. it was something they needed to hear. The tension was slightly less, and hearing that she was satisfied with their growth calmed their nerves.
An Ran especially was considering what she said, her brow furrowed.
“Now, I must go, but I shall be back tonight. Meditate, and train lightly, for it would do you no good to hurt yourself.”
The Disciples chorused their ascent, as Xiulan went into the town around the Dueling Peaks.
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“See him?” Yun Ren shouted at Tigu from her position standing on his shoulders.
“No!” She called back, before hopping down onto the road space with a frown. She bit her lip, as her eyes searched fruitlessly.
The day had started well enough, after Xiulan had left. They had decided to go to the outskirts, and then work their way in, which had been a bit of a mistake.
Honestly, there were actually a lot more people than Yun Ren was expecting here. Merchant caravans poured in, erecting pop-up shops or stalls. The roads were a whirlwind of work… but everybody seemed to be concentrated in the outskirts. The only people he saw walking towards the mountain were those with nicer clothes.
But that was mostly irrelevant at the moment.
Yun Ren raised an eyebrow at Tigu, who caught his eye for a moment, before studiously looking away, and pretending like she was still searching the crowd.
“Tigu.” He said, and the girl slumped a little, turning to face him directly, her head held high, but resigned.
‘This is Ri Zu’s fault. She smelled medicinal herbs this way.’ The rat’s nose was poking out of Tigu’s shirt, and her hands were wringing together.
“No, I disobeyed Master’s orders, and got too excited.” Tigu muttered, as both of them looked at him.
Yun Ren sighed, and tugged at his ponytail. He didn’t do scolding. He left that to Meimei. But here he was, the arbiter of justice as Tigu looked incredibly guilty.
It was kind of annoying that she’d done it. But he had seen the signs and chased after her, stopping outside a shop closer to the mountain. She had been a bit embarrassed then…. And then even more so when Yun Ren realised that his brother wasn’t right behind them.
Even retracing their steps hadn’t turned him up, which is where Tigu went from slightly guilty to worried and ashamed.
Yun Ren chopped his hand into Tigu’s head. The girl blinked curiously at the light blow.
“Are you gonna do it again?” he asked.
“No, I shall not.” Tigu stated with conviction. Having something unfortunate happen often got lessons to stick, so he probably wouldn’t have to keep too much an eye on her.
“Then there's no sense worrying about it. Gou is gonna be fine.”
“Indeed! Our fellow disciple is more than a match for any challenge!” Tigu said reassuring herself.
Yun Ren pondered for a moment.
“You mentioned smell, Ri Zu, do you have anything?” He asked. The rat sniffed the air, and shook her head with a grimace.
“Too many people, that even Gou Ren’s smell does not stand out.’ Ri Zu squeaked at him.
Yun Ren sighed again.
Their search was largely fruitless, so they continued their walk through the overcrowded outskirts, to the less crowded streets, and to the restaurant.
“My friends!” They heard a shout, and Yun Ren turned. They had found Xiulan before his brother. She looked a little tired, and her eyes searched for Gou.
Yun Ren shrugged, as Tigu tried to hide behind him.
“Hes probably at the meeting spot.” Yun Reen explained.
Xiulan nodded, looking a little concerned, as they turned to he restaurant. It was a more opulent place, like the inn, but for some reason, most of the seating was out the back, in little gazebos.
Yuin Ren breathed a sigh of relief, as he saw his brother’s back. Then he saw that his brother was sitting with someone.
A woman.
A woman that was leaning forward slightly, her eyes fixed on his dear baby brother. A true classical beauty that obviously wasn't a server judging by the quality of her dress.
Tigu’s eyes widened happily as she saw Gou Ren, and made to rush off to greet their wayward companion. But a hand on her shoulder stopped her.
“Eh?” Tigu asked.
Yun Ren shook his head, smiling proudly at the scene. There was a brief urge to let Tigu gear up for a tackling hug in front of the woman Gou Ren had just met… but Yun Ren was a kind and generous brother.
Which is when the last person he expected to ruin things stepped forward.
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“And that is how I defeated the Young Master of The Azure Sky Sect!” Xianghua boasted, as she finished her story. “I threw some medicine at his feet and pitied him for his weakness! He was most incensed! His face went as red as a cherry! It was the Blade of Grass that taught me that insult!”
Gou Ren nodded, surprisingly engrossed. He was still a little unsure of what to make of the woman. They had wandered around together for a little, until Gou Ren got tired of searching, and went to the restaurant they had said they would meet up at.
He assumed that the woman would leave after that, but instead, she had sat down with him, and out of politeness, Gou Ren had started trying to make conversation.
Conversation that had somehow ended up with her telling a story about how she defeated somebody last month in a battle.
And then fixed him up, which made him angry for some reason? As angry as she was when Xiulan “went easy on her” the last time they fought.
Gou Ren really didn’t get cultivators. Xiangua described every act of decency she did as an insult.
“What about yourself, Xong Gou Ren, what manner of martial exploits have you?” she suddenly asked, as if she had just realised she had been the only one talking for the better part of an hour.
Gou Ren was about to say none. But if Xiulan was her “eternal rival…”
“I kicked Xiulan into the river once.” He said, joking. The woman’s eyes widened.
“You landed a blow upon Cai Xiulan?” She stated, shifting around the bench they were sitting on slightly, and getting closer to him. Her eyes were wide and impressed.
“Ah, no it was… kind of a surprise attack…?” He floundered. She took that the wrong way.
Instead, she seemed more impressed.
“Perhaps, after the tournament, we shall trade pointers sometime…?” she asked leadingly.
Gou Ren shrugged. It would be a bit like sparring with Xiulan, right—
“Liu Xianghua.” Xiulan’s said blandly. “What are your intentions with my Junior Brother?”
Gou Ren turned around. Xiulan was right beside him, while Yun Ren was further back, looking apologetic for some reason.
He felt a hand touch his arm.
“I am merely speaking with your Junior Brother, Cai Xiulan.” Xianghua stated, a smirk in her voice. “You act like I shall steal him away~!”
Xiulan frowned, and her eyes narrowed.
Xianghua laughed.
“Oh? That is a fantastic expression, Cai. I hope to see it more often.” The woman abruptly stood. “It was adequate meeting you, Xong Gou Ren. But your companions have arrived, and I cannot stand to stay in this woman’s presence until I have defeated her!”
“I shall see you at the tournament, Cai Xiulan!” She declared in a loud voice, drawing the attention of everyone in the restaurant, before leaving in a storm of silk.
Gou Ren raised an eyebrow, before shrugging. A bit dramatic, that.
“Took you guys long enough, he grumbled, as they sat down.” His brother shrugged, while Tigu started mumbling out apologies.
Xiulan, on the other hand, looked annoyed.
“Steal him away?’ She grumbled. “You can do much better than that woman, Junior Brother! I’ll warn her off bothering you.”
Gou Ren raised an eyebrow at the declaration, but Xiulan was deep in thought.
“An Ran perhaps…? She has a much better disposition….”
Gou Ren looked to his brother, who just raised his hands helplessly.
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Most of the time, writing is very fun and rewarding for me. I enjoy it immensely.
This was not one of those times. This one was a grind, and everything seemed to be going wrong. Scenes didn't fit, POVs didn't work, dialogue was like pulling teeth. I pulled it together in the end, but oh boy was this one exhausting.
Sometimes you knock out 6k in five hours. sometimes you do not even 2k in 24. This one was the latter.
Comments
Luke
Sorry this one was so frustrating for you to write! I did enjoy it though, you did a great job! I'm really looking forward to this whole arc, it's fun seeing the "kids" out to play!
Jan Alexander
Xianghua's theatrics. Haha
Calico C
I loved the chapter. :) you did good work on this one.
James Squibb
Still, a wonderful chapter nonetheless! Thank you for your hard work! It is always enjoyable to read!
BRUNO ASTUR
"Xiulan nodded, looking a little concerned, as they turned to he restaurant. It was a more opulent place, like the inn, but for some reason, most of the seating was out the back, in little gazebos." It seems it is not only Jin that can see a repeating pattern over fights in restaurants. “And that is how I defeated the Young Master of The Azure Sky Sect!” Xianghua boasted, as she finished her story. “I threw some medicine at his feet and pitied him for his weakness! He was most incensed! His face went as red as a cherry! It was the Blade of Grass that taught me that insult!” Also, Cultivators mating rituals are strange. She is trying to show her worth by mentioning how she beat other people, And I loved the jealousy of Xiulan, even if she is not ready to accept that yet.
Space253
Notably this was the first time the viewpoint got split three ways and the first time the seperate storylines had to meet up at the same place and time with a time constraint. Usually the viewpoint splits in two and there is a chapter break between locations, and if they meet up it is one party coming back to the other with no set time to expect them.
Space253
How do you delete someone else's comment?
GregTOF
I think Zang li os going to cause problems to xiulan and Jin is going to come to the rescue ... How the conflict is going to play out i dont know ... Probably Bi De giving a beating to Zang Li ... The Legend of the Hero Rooster of the Azure Hills trully begins
Termac
I think it's more that she wanted Xianghua to leave him alone.
Space253
The only part that stands out as unpolished is the old man that gets knocked down seemed like it was going somewhere with why he was walking backwards confused, checkovs musket style.
Ground Coffee Mug
It may have been a small chapter, but it was certainly a delight. Sorry to hear it was a slog to go through, but here's hoping that the next ones are more fun to make
David Bean
If it was difficult it doesn’t show. Turned out great, and sets up what could be some wonderful hijinks in the future.
aj0413
Ah the old "I turned him down, but now that he's grown up into a fine man, he has my interest..." + dense male romance interest + eternal rival = romance shenanigans in the future? Would actually kinda fit since each "disciple" has embodied one cliche or another lol
Ichypa
Haha Xianghua is going to go after Gou twice as hard now that she knows that it irritates Xiulan
Adam Rosenberg
Sorry it was a slog, but I really loved it
Adam Rosenberg
I don't know that I'd call her traditional Xianxia per se, more like Classic Haughty Anime Girl
Len
I wanted her to stick around and see a picture of the far am gang joking around the water with barely visible in the background xuilan riding washi
Jeff Scott
It's looking like she wasn't hitting on him sincerely, merely using him to get at Xiulan. And ya, definitely oblivious to her high society flirtation style. I doubt he hides his cultivation, I doubt anyone from Fa Ram does. Their style is more natural and passive so their base level is probably very subdued and blended into the background. The thing Tigu did was a more intentional projection than no longer holding back.
Yunru
It's the hamsters man, they keep getting teased through such "typos". Gotta watch out for the ninja hamsters.
Adolfo
Remember that you can take a day or two off writing to organize your story. Having a clear plan and knowing which beats you want to hit is as important as getting the words out. If you need to take Wednesday off to give us a stronger chapter Friday.
Aaron
"took you guys long enough he grumbled as they sat down" A few paragraphs from the end. The end quote is in the wrong spot.
Dale Tucker
Xianghua is a great addition thus far. Love to see traditional Xianxia characters interact with our goofs. always funny
Ask-if-I-like-lemons
Yeah this one was short
Bunny Waffles
If it was a slog, perhaps it wasn't really the chapter you wanted to write? Rest on it, then come back and read it fresh the next day
Joris Middendorp
Everything has it's ups and downs, but I'm glad you stuck it out for another great chapter
Imspinnennetz
I was hoping that Tigger would confront Xiulan's rival. I love that Guo Ren is completely oblivious to the fact that she was hitting on him the entire time. Does Guo Ren know how to hide his cultivation level? Tigger seems to know how to control the amount of Qi that she is showing.
Andrew
Thank you!
hercule pyro
Fwiw I’m loving these chapters. Sucks that they’re hard to write but it’s a lot of fun seeing the kids in this environment
Sean Ulrich
This chapter is well written and moves the story forward! It’s good and I hope the next chapters are easier on your keyboard!
Gremlin
Thank you, I hope the next one is a pleasure :)
Trasen56
I enjoyed the chapter, hopefully that helps make the time worth it :)
Aaron
It still moves the story along, and it's well written other than "Hidden AMster’s disciplesTomorrow" right near the beginning. If you hadn't mentioned the grind, I wouldn't have known from the quality. Still an enjoyable chapter.
Reiner Fox
Edit: this was removed /corrected. THANK YOU! Spelling in second paragraph? "bring the hidden amsters disciples"
