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Interlude: The War and the Rooster

🕑 Added 2021-08-20 20:14:18 +0000 UTC

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Obran

If it is of any help, inspirationally speaking, here is a video of a puppy riding a chicken. https://twitter.com/TheoShantonas/status/1430952289158762501?s=20

Obran

May the queen’s reign be tyrannical. May she impale the heads of grasshoppers and beetles on spikes around her hive boxes.

Imspinnennetz

She thought that Jin like other cultivators would make Cultivation pills from her grubs. Instead, Jin is only interested in the honey.

Big I

So what was the deal with Vajra offering up grubs for sacrifice? Is that how you get royal jelly to eat or something?

Mrdelta

But these cretins have tried to sully the greats emperors flesh! How can any true and loyal monarch allow such blasphemy towards their liege go unpunished? It is an assault on his very PERSON!!!

Dee

I really enjoy how the story has been expanding to cover more points of view. Enjoy your break!

Amit Gupta

Hmm, while I liked the Style of writing & misdirection, wouldn't Hornets or Locusts make a more apt enemy for the Bees and the Farm?

Bobby B.

I... ah... I thought the demons from the demon wars were vampires now... bees huh

LiamOfOrmonde

Ooofh. The kid in the rooster mask reminded me of Jacket from Hotline Miami for a second.

Nick

Thanks for the chapter

Robert Mullins

Mosquitos. As has been stated 3 other times in the comments here.

Paul Millsted

What were Vajra's forces fighting? Rival Bees? Ants?

Imspinnennetz

More likely Jin will realize Vajra has the spark when he catches her ogling him in the bathhouse.

Weldt

I got fooled twice first was when I thought bi de was watching more from the crystal and second when I thought that Bi De was defending Fa Ram seriously you are good in illusion makings.

Bookman

You had me in the first half, not gonna lie. Took me that long to get that the "Soilders" section was about the bees. Gota love the misdirection.

wanderer117

I am the terror, that flaps in the night I am the disquieting shadow that distracts ne'erdowells I am bright feathered roster!

Justin van mele

I like the queen too, but I wonder how long she will live for. A normal queen honey bee has 1-2 years and workers have from 30- 200 days. Given they are now Qi bees now that may all be doubled or a bit more, I would like to see the changes over generations.

Ichypa

I laughed until I couldn’t breath at the rooster mask. Well done.

Robert Mullins

Mosquitos

N0T0B0K

Quick question, what were the bees fighting in the beginning. Other bees, wasps, or hornets?

Saaski

I second this.

Xultanis

Personally I'm looking forward to the day Jin sees the bees hanging banners and such outside the hives and confirms Vajra has a spark.

Andrew

Thank you!

Sean Wilner

I love the misdirection on the chapter segments! Correction for exclusivity attachment: "... leaping and flipping through the air, as such a creature that commanded the sky only could." -> "... leaping and flipping through the air, as only such a creature that commanded the sky could."

Adam Daw

And Varja is great

Adam Daw

I love these chapters. Thanks!!

Buzz1089

I think the Great Queen Vajra is my favorite side character!

Sewal

Well played. You had me fooled in the beginning. I thought it was continuing with jin's grandpa POV and the fight was the empire vs the demons. Also thank you for adding the cultivator mosquitoes. One of my predictions is now fulfilled.

Mutabulis

Both of these stories completely fooled and confused me... And yet made perfect sense once the context was in... Nice work.

Jack Trowell

This chapter did a fine job subverting our expectations, first with the "rebel queen" then with the fake rooster.

Bat

Love chapters like this too!

Simon Casey

“The Great Queen Varja reclined upon her throne” should be Vajra. Thanks for the chapter! I love seeing different perspectives and what’s going on for the other characters.

Sean Ulrich

I totally thought the thieves were at the Farm, and was wondering where the dog came from. Love to see the growth of Bi De’s apprentice! Great interlude!

Luke

Very much enjoy this sort of fun chapter too, thanks for the story and enjoy your break!

Sean Ulrich

Super Xianxia mosquitoes.

Imspinnennetz

Well we just got the dog. Only the horse remains. PS. Do mosquitos have black carapace? I always thought that they were more translucent around the belly and greyish in color.


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