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Interlude 2: The Twilight

🕑 Added 2021-03-17 15:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Pamela Gillespie

Silk from spirit beasts. Are there spider spirit beasts?

SV

Since you are talking about Howling Fang Mountains in Crimson Phoenix empire, shouldn't it be along the lines: As one went south, the Howling Fang Mountains begin to flourish.

Sphinxes

and Crimson Empire cannibals-->They lived in isolated pockets in the valleys, with the occasional outpost high up in the passes. It was a hard life, confined to little stretches of green land in a sea of stone teeth, always hungry for unwary travelers.

Sean Wilner

I think since it's an adjective meaning densely populated, 'populous' works there. It's just that 'populace' is a noun and doesn't really make sense when attached to a copula if modified with a quantifier. For instance "The people in the suburbs of NYC are a populace" is a bit weird, but grammatically fine. However, "The people in the suburbs of NYC are more populace" doesn't make sense and should read "The people in the suburbs of NYC are more populous [than those in DC]."

Lucre

It is certainly an odd turn of phrase, either way.

Sean Wilner

I think you mean "the peoples more populace" -> "the peoples more populous"

NorkNork

The northern rangers were wind-blown and barren. --> The rangers are barren? Nay! They are fertile though the ranges they range on are quite barren.

lala jhones

We knew he took the skin of the real "young master," but I think author is using the term "parasite" as more of what he is doing, rather than what he is.

We knew that. "Now, he would have the resources of the Shrouded Mountain, as he originally intended when he slew the young master and devoured him." - Chapter 8

Andrew R.

That's assuming he goes... I don't think I've seen him say anything about going. Gou Ren said something about going, so maybe he will?

matthew gilley

Did we know he was a parasite? Or is that new?

Sassy

Lu Ban might fuck around and find out. Like he did last time he was being an asshole within earshot of Jin.

Andrew R.

I'm worried for Xiulan now. Lu Ban might try to "stunt her cultivation"

Robert Mullins

Looks like we know where he will be introduced again.


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