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V3 C1: Settling back into it.

🕑 Added 2022-04-05 05:54:56 +0000 UTC

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V01D

“Beside us, Big D hadd hopped off my shoulder” - extra D “It'sIts gotten big, hasn’t” - doubled its

Keliana Tayler

This is a wonderful start! It's good to re-establish normalcy after such a massive incident like what happened at the tournament. And to remind people that things are good, even when there's problems on the horizon I'm super excited to see where this book takes us!

Carl Mason

I actually had a dog one time who would nurse our cat's kittens, so yeah, dogs and cats are absolutely friendly if they feel comfortable together.

Whale A

If the internet and my therapist has taught me anything is that cats and dog positively love each other as long as they aren't competing for love and affection

Mathieu Deg

Nice chapter ! Little typo : "Beside us, Big D hadd hopped off" ->had

Len

oh i WANT the aftermath of gou ren's parents & the village going nuts on the "“This Liu Xianghua asks to court your son!” her voice boomed. “Allow me to call you mother and father!" Especially the scene when Gou Ren Shows up. bliss is back. i love this story.

Chad Hagner

TYFC I think it was a great start to the volume, just showing the family getting back into the groove of home life.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!

KnightRider007

“Beside us, Big D hadd hopped off my shoulder and landed on the table in the shade. “

Holo

"Big D occasionally sent a gust of wind my way with his wings, letting a breeze hit me as well as And it was my final chore for the day." Feels like something's missing here...

paul Emmer

This is so much more than a slice of life book All will see with time

IG884HIRE

I'm waiting for the slew of visitors to start arriving. Most of the local sects have members who would be welcome to visit, and that doesn't even touch on the trade company or any Plum Blossoms showing up. Mostly though, I'm waiting for Washy to show off his master of math and fluid dynamics by helping the little lame boiler maker boy craft his big sis a full on set of steampunk powerarmor.

g00b3r guts

Love it

paul Emmer

Beautifully written your talents are unbelievable

AnthraxRipple

This was really excellent, thanks!

Matt

The chapter definitely has the Fa Ram feel to it. Great start to Book 3!

ImaRat

My grandparents had german Shepards while I was growing up, and they told me that when I was a baby they could leave me napping in the yard and the dog would just curl up around me.

James Squibb

It is a wonderful chapter. Something to ease into book three. I am excited for the slice of life that is to come!

Daniel Gesualdi

The finished one sounds very good I would say the "nth correct chapter"

Havefeith

You have a point in this chapter where it cuts off after "as well as", and then continues with the next paragraph. It's around when it seems Jin is playfighting with Big D. Great chapter regardless. I enjoyed reading it.

Kyle

Jin thinks the word American before he thinks Canadian. He thinks around the nation but never the name. Somehow this saddens me. Still, good starting chapter.

Thunderhoof

I think a family would be a good term. They don't seem to be too keen on recruitment and a clan is like having the same family line but the animals there have different names.

Trent Cannon

Loved the new chapter! Honestly when I saw that baby bump mentioned it just got me excited for that little event. It’s gonna be amazing, and you just can’t help but want to see more. Anyways, thanks for the chapter, and I’m looking forward to seeing what comes next!

Trent Cannon

A dog with a hard boiled personality just reminds me of the old Hank the cow dog books I read as a kid, which were written from the point of view of a super serious, hard boiled, and tough farm dog, or at least in his mind. He was also dumber than a box of rocks, and they were hilarious

Big I

I've been think for a while now that Jin's going to end up founding either a clan or a sect. Mention of a potential village only makes me more certain. Thoughts?

RedFaux

Just thought I'd share, but if "Eighth Correct Place" feels to clunky of a name to people, remember its probably closer to "第八名" or 'Day-Bah-Ming' in Cantonese, an old version of which 'cultivation era' Chinese people would be speaking

Demian Buckle

Greetings Book 3, may we have a wonderful journey together. Thank you for another great chapter.

Caithdean SValerient

Kudos!

Thunderhoof

Maybe Jin need to get a dog soon so it can have a spark and babysit his child like a guardian.

Thunderhoof

What dog would be good for the story? Hmmm I mean the personality? A hardboil type?

Nicholas Marians

My mental image would probably be more aptly described as goofydos whenever I picture his facial expressions though haha

David Bean

A great start, it sure is nice to see the farm again. Thanks Casual!

Draugluir

Am I the only one who always see gyarados in my head whenever washi is mentioned?

Will mILLER

Let’s gooooo

Alexander Dupree

I saw a "hadd" I think also I can't find it now

Alexander Dupree

"It'sIts gotten big, hasn’t it?” <-copy paste error?

Fiery Diamond

Hey, as long as it gets written, I'm here to read it. BoC is my addiction. Good stuff, as always.

Bunny Waffles

Woo! Gave one last check before I turned in for the night and I am glad I did!

Andrew

Thank you!

stratum

You know, only people who associate "apple pie" with US are Canadians and Americans. It's not actually all that unique, and was an imported idea from Europe anyway... Not saying that the viewpoint is wrong, seeing as the main character is Canadian. But it's just a little bit jarring to read it, at times.

Sean Ulrich

Fresh beginning to a new Volume!!!

Homeless One

ahhh we're back in business baby!!! lovely chapter

Summercat

Hey now, this was a decent chapter. Set up as a reminder of where we left off, and two problems in the immediate that'll be attended to.

1an

LETS GOOOOOOO


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