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v2c73: The Hearth

🕑 Added 2021-10-19 00:57:10 +0000 UTC

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ByzFan

Thank you. I always find myself smiling when I read this tale. A tale as wide as it is tall.

ArtaN KozaK

Amazing and wonderfull chapter. Every time when i read your story i fell peace in my heart and mind.

Sere Maddox

Ah. My conjecture had the Earth Spirit as the original soul of the embryo: the logical confirmation of Jin's belief of reciprocity with the Land, and a continuance of the theme of the various Spirit Animals gaining human form. Perhaps Jin and Mei Li become literal parents to the reawakened Earth Spirit, who grows to teach The Dance to the other villages in the area and reawakens the Chi flows of the Azure Hills in the process? Perhaps that strays too far into "uncanny valley" territory, however, not having a child born from human parents be entirely human. The novel series DUNE had Alia Atredes as a child born with ancient knowledge: I was thinking of something like this, but perhaps more fey and wild, elfin.

John Koor

I wouldn't like that. It would imply that the earth spirit pushed out the child's soul to use it as a vessel. Better to just have the kid turn out to be amazing since it was born and raised on the farm, and the earth spirit to see the child as a little brother/sister.

Chad Hagner

I really really liked this chapter, good continued story building.

Stewart Boyatt

Lu RI? Cloudy Seord guy? Definitely.

Artur Vogt

well. what do you want?

Kara Nina

The author is going in chronological order, which is one way of doing this. Another would be to work through these three stories that are unfolding one after the other. But that is simply about style and the second type would confuse a lot of readers regarding the chronological order

Kara Nina

He's at the tournament

Russel

I hate how right that sounds

HighterDK

Daaaamn. That felt like a Studio Ghibli story. Incredible chapter.

Anders Kirkegaard

I feel like we are jumbing point of view to much, the story has slowed significant down, and only move forward at a really slow pace.

xdxx345

This was excellent. The dream sequences consoling the earth spirit are interspersed smoothly with scenes showcasing Fa Ram's new, magical normal. The ethereal quality of the days' passing is reflected upon with Meiling's "small little jolts" of surreality, injecting a moment of verisimilitude into the prose that I think really completes this chapter. It ties all of the spirits, magic and talking animals to Meiling's origins as a vivacious, but mortal, young woman. It may be just my currently oddly sappy state of mind affecting my judgement, but this is a top 3 chapter for me at the moment. Thanks!

Druid Killa

Meimei is a Disney princess.

Sere Maddox

The Earth Spirit incarnating as Jin's wise magical child would be amazing. She might age more quickly into adulthood than "normal" babies/children, or she may choose to stop aging at some point and be a forever child, a wise youth of the Wilds who happens to also live with her loving parents at Fa Ram. I wonder, as the Golden Roads are repaired, if Bi De will take a second journey to re-connect the dancing shrines for his new companion?

Yunru

I kept expecting what's-his-name to turn up looking for Jin, it seemed like the perfect setup.

Ashlazaria

This one was special. I loved it.

Daniel

This was really nice and cozy. Loved it!

Space253

Sounds like Jin might be about to get an extension cord for his land based power.

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter. I enjoy it and liked the Earth Spirit scenes. It gave more insight into her character.

Artur Vogt

i absofuckinglutely loved this one. this chapter felt like a cup of cocoa while siting in a warm chair looking out the window in the fall.

Efgbog

Babe looks to becoming a master of cutting, can't wait for him to get his human body and amaze everyone with his perfect cuts with his plow.

Digdug

Ty so much for the chapter. I needed Meiling dose today!

mindsystem

Liking the slice of life "life on the range" bits. While I hope their home doesn't get attacked again a la Chou Ji, I'd love to see Babe and Sunny deal with someone/thing in their own stoic swordsman way.

Garrett

All fruits are vegetables, but not all vegetables are fruits. A vegetable is basically any edible part of a plant, be it the root, the stem, the leaf, or the fruit. Fruits just feel different because the plant wants them to be eaten and grows them to be appetizing, whereas the rest of the plant is more... organic.

alex ayala

i'm glad i wasn't the only one, I thought it was their unborn kid at first

Michael Maor

Great chapter, and I really liked the Earth spirit scenes, looking forward to seeing what effect her spreading out from the farm and connecting to other fragments will have.

Gabriel

I really enjoyed this chapter. I love this style of story and the way you are telling it.

J Klugh

Is earthchan going to incarnate? That’s a lot of little girl dreams for a pregnant lady

Aaron Martinez

It wasn't Jin's, it was Big De's and the rest.

Len

I am thinking the gold road is the old pathway - Ley lines -that got destroyed ages ago that routed the spirit power around the region. And the spirit is now REPAIRING them........bets on when the route to sea grass city is fixed, at least enough for her power to flow through, in small amounts smoothly?

Tzeneth

Does it still stay sword intent or does it become plow intent? Maybe it just stays part of the larger Dao of cutting! :P

James Squibb

It took me until the third scene to realize it was the earth spirit. However, I very much enjoyed them.

Bobby B.

My god... was listening to some soft violin music and I could FEEL this chap, the echo of waiting for my ma to get back stateside, it... wow. Well done.

Torbjørn Nilsen

Jupp, everytime I read about her I want to give her a big hug and tell her that it's all going to be OK. For this is the feel-good series books, about Fa Ram where there are close to only good stuff happening.

Jan Alexander

Very apt chapter title. Mushroom and Cheese! Can't have pizza without it. Its good to see the Earth Spirit more active and communicating with Meimei. Babe a swordsman? Haha.

Leviathon251

Love it. Thanks for the chapter

Calico C

I can definitely see the land spirits’ attributes being noticed, and that’s how the land is divided. Azure Hills is the domain of our spirit. I can also see the places where demons roam and attack heavily fortified cities is a place where the earth spirit doesn’t care for or outright hates humans

Blahful

It's a fruit. Assuming that you meant chilly pepper.

aj0413

Earth-Chan is always welcomed here :)

Michael Otton

I'd say there's 1 earth spirit but shes so fractured and damaged that multiple fragments could be awoken then either merge later or chose to stay separate but weaker and more personalized.

Obran

Have you ever contemplated the humble pepper? It is a new world vegetable that was native to central America. When the Spanish came to the Americas, one of the things they brought back was the pepper. From there it spread across Eurasia, every country selectively breeding it for their localized tastes. The northern europeans turned it into the bell pepper. Hungarians turned it into Paprika. India and south east asia pumped up the heat and added it to curries. Africans turned it into Peri Peri peppers. It is a fascinating vegetable.

Reiner Fox

I wonder if their is only the one earth spirit or multiple out there that are being tormented and abused? It would be fun to learn more one day about where those paths lead, and how they might be better protected from damage in the future? Maybe spirit beast play a role in that?

Adam Moore

this is a dope chapter brother

David Bean

Excellent, all of it.

J3_Haustkottr

Perfect

Paerofar

Seconded, it was a lovely way to get time cuts into this chapter so we got only the best parts of each day

Summercat

Earth Chan is... Yes.

Dale

Looks like Our little earth spirit has come to gether enough to finally work up to start pulling herself back together and start fully healing.

Mrdelta

Honestly I loved the earth spirit scenes. Though it does make me wonder about the gender of Mei's baby.

Jonathan Rudel

The conversations with earth chan gave this chapter a sort of dreamy feel for me. I think it worked quite good.

Paratus

Love the farm stuff. Although I'm waiting for the bad guy to pull something with Tigu or Xiulan and Jin mysteriously shows up just in time to give him more PTSD.

Bob Semxy

Was wondering how those pendants the guards wore was able to pick up jins qi. Turns out the earth spirit wasn't with him. Also the scenes with the spirit were good and kinda alude to what memories it might uncover and if those memories connect to Bi De's quest. Good chapter overall

Lochar

This is the furthest her "Connected One" has gone, so it's right for her to be scared of him never coming back. Because of cutting herself off from the wider world, she's basically a powerful child with little wisdom. Which makes it a damn good thing Meimei has some answers for her. Otherwise Jin might actually have not liked his return home. And good job on showing Meiling keeping a touch of whimsical wonder in her day to day life. Anything can become normal if you let it, but it's much more fun to still not see the grand become mundane.

The Slowest Turtle

Soo good. I love these "day in the life" chapters.

Bob of Doom

It also shows the spirits fear and how she is willing to take risks again

Bob of Doom

I think the Earth spirit parts make the scene. It shows how important everyone is to Fa Ram.

Ask-if-I-like-lemons

Oh it was the earth spirit. I thought it was some future sight thing and it's their daughter.

Eric

The spirit scenes were fine. At first I thought she was dreaming of her child, but it made more sense by the second dream.

Eric Hicks

I always enjoy when the Earth Spirit makes an appearance... one of my favorite people in the story so far.

Robert Mullins

I'd say this is your best portrayal of life on the farm yet. And the earth spirit scene(s?) Sit among the best you've written.

BRUNO ASTUR

I liked the spirit scenes. She is still hurting, so her behavior is acceptable. Also I can't wait for when Jin and Meilin discover about her.

J B

I think it’s well written, and shows both the sadness in the spirit’s existene, as well as the sheer terror she could be.

Phillip Ingram

I really liked this chapter. I thought the spirit scenes were great. It's weird but with everything being so peaceful, I honestly felt like there was some sort of ominous undertone with the spirit.

Bunny Waffles

I like it! While I am excited to see what happens at the city, the sense of what life is like at home and the worries of Earthy and the potentially dark roads her worries take her mind down, and over all just Meiling being Meiling.

Sean Ulrich

I like seeing the spirit’s reaction to him leaving. Not all powerful, but very human

Ben Allen

Thank goodness! I needed my fix.


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