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American Isekai - Chapter 223

🕑 Added 2024-11-21 13:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Gabriel Victor

Harsha is blinded by pride. She doesn't seem to understand that being the only gear unable to carry her own weight in a well oiled machine will make the whole thing collapse.

Chase Wickersham

Hey spade when do you think you’ll release the next chapter of serum I really like this story but want to see where the other one goes.

Kevin Baldwin

You think you will finish this story? Asking for a friend

EvanRP007

So do y’all think there is potential that he uses his mind to break other minds. I feel like that’s kinda the point of a mind specialist. Plus with him having this fortes up and warding off his teacher I feel like this is a tool John has not been trying to use or think about.

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Bro wrote his own story in that comment

Caleb Gilbreath

That’s a good answer

Jarvalicious

I think those were just some random beast placed there to introduce the fantasy setting early on, kinda like “Hey, here’s a flying thing that people can ride on. Definitely not earth.” At least that’s how I took it when reading. Also, I think transport leaned more into the magical vehicle side with the trains, trucks, and bikes early on. Rather than magical beast type. For a canon answer. Maybe those beasts are just cheaper and kinda suck compared to a magic vehicle or taking the train

Joseph Underwood

Gotta love sycophants who can't take constructive criticism. Its called eloquence where every word has value and impact and the story progresses enough to satiate you until the next installment. Thats what every writer is supposed to aspire to even in serial writing. This last two weeks was alot of words no real impact, barely even edging. Left me feeling like I wanted and paid for a grilled T-bone steak and got microwave dinner Salisbury instead and have to look forward to eating that for the next month.

Shawn Zips

Love the work spade it’s truly a joy to read your pov of a 21st century American in a fantasy world. It’s quite amazing. While I sympathize with those ranting about getting more volume in your chapters I would rather have quality over quantity 😁 keep up the good work👍 that being said MOOOOOOORRRREEE!!!!

LolGamez

Jesus Christ I guess you forgot that the pacing changes when you have the completed book. You are not entitled to the entire story shifting pace to suit weekly uploads. Some authors do that, but they don't have to

Caleb Gilbreath

I do have one more question. What about those birds that John first arrived at the capital on? Why haven’t we seen their use?

Caleb Gilbreath

Huh🤔 I don’t know how I missed that

Caleb Gilbreath

Thank you for the clarification

Jarvalicious

To add onto what Spade said with more context, the four kings were named canonically a while ago in the Black Spider Repository (bounty list).

Sp4de

Anarchy, Despair, Unholy Light, and The Brood are the four kings

SH**tAk3R

If you don't like it, write your own story, no one needs your opinion.

Joseph Underwood

So we can't make it all the way through the battle before having to wait a week? I think I need to stop the subscription and come back in a year when maybe there is a novels worth of content rather then paying a whole novel's price for about two real novel chapters a month. I wouldn't mind if the storyline progressed weekly but bi weekly, if even that, is just too slow. Last week's two installments should have been just the first. And this week's plus whatever next week until the end of this battle should have been last week's second installment. And the whole current deployment arc should be done by the end of next week. Then back to the Capital and progressing the John vs. the King's enforcers or whatever storyline. Fuck a M240 when the M134 exists. Not to mention big guns like mortars and artillery like AT4's you can summon at will without even having to reload. Just have John pull out a MK-54 Davy Crockett if you wanna keep it to handheld. If not an actual weapons system like the MGR-1 Honest "John". Or hell a Fatboy and have Umara lob that shit with magic at this group of asshats to be done with it while everybody goes WTF over the mushroom cloud. At this rate the battle will take another four weeks like some DBZ or One Piece fight scene. That dude is supposed to remember everything now so I know he would go looking for shit like that and not just keep playing Rambo. Have some respect for the character cause I see him as smarter then sticking to gunpowder and small arms for for taking out a group like this in a balls to the wall situation his friends are in. He woulda pulled out the MK-54 in a heartbeat, mushroom clouded them probably multiple times using his aura sense to calculate the firing trajectory from 3 Klicks out. And by the way to end the rant I don't mind waiting for quality. I wouldn't mind it just being one well written story progressing chapter a week with a cliffhanger every so often. What I don't like though is to be edged without any progression and then an arduous slog of days or weeks before any actual progression. Especially since that is how 90% of these damn things end up never finishing and instead just petering out or being dropped right in the middle with no resolution. Its like people forgot how to tell and pace an actual story so its resolves instead just dragging it out milking it until the writer burns out, the consumers get bored or distracted, and/or the writer/artist just up and dies like happened with Solo-Leveling and probably will with Game of Thrones. Thanks for coming to my Ted talk.

Georges H Creve-Coeur

This was awesome!

Caleb Gilbreath

So we have confronted anarchy, met a royal of despair and have heard mention of chaos. That’s three of the four kings. What is the fourth king? Seeing that they are antithesis to human prosperity, Maby tyrany? They are not vices so something like hate wouldn’t fit. It has to be a concept that fits with the theme of a scourge to humanity. Any guessed guys?

john Vargas

I can see harsha getting taken prisoner because of her own stupidity. Then being transformed and blaming the special forces for it all. She seems like a villain origin story so far

Scott Martin

Fantastic chapter, so glad I subscribed!

J.R. Turner

OK, just read the whole chapter(twice) and have to say it is worth the wait and still I want more... We humbly beg and plead. But will be there when ever you post more.

Rcmrocks

I was thinking the same thing

bryce york

Personally I'm hoping that Harsha will, by some stroke of luck (and possibly sacrifice, be the inspiration tana neds to fix her auraic technique to catch up to her friends.

Jarvalicious

Harsha and Eric gonna try some bullshit

Erica Robbi

Ohhhh it is ramping up! John Cooper Envoy of Death

Just a dude here to read Spades works

You know these chapters always feel short. Then I scroll up and see the extent of the the material I just read and realize it wasn't I just played the whole thing in my head like an episode of a show. Spade your the only author that I could read for hours and only notice the passage of time several hours later. Love your work man!

TangiblyTrashy

I'm calling it, Harsha will betray humanity. Her pride and lack of strength is too much to ignore.

Dakota Buelt

I hope the next chapter at least finishes this fight off it seems like tanas about to make a stride in aura

Just a dude here to read Spades works

Stayed up again I really can't get enough!


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