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American Isekai - Chapter 220

🕑 Added 2024-11-12 13:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Gabriel Victor

This story is so good, sheesh!

Joseph Underwood

This chapter is fluff and filler. No one gives two cents about that joke hat or those two throw away characters. World building can be done with eloquence rather then whatever this chapter was. The author is obviously pulling the "my deadline is here but I don't have enough substance so just put out fluff" maneuver. Like some highschool or college kid needing enough words for an essay. My points are valid from an editorial standpoint. Quit being sycophants. I would rather have one really good chapter the size of one in an actual novel were the story actually progresses rather then two flaccid essays a week and the story only progress like once a month or less.

Dakota Buelt

Yeah so he should be able to just have a spark going to town 24/7 and double it’s processing speed using his actual brain when he wants to focus on it

J.R. Turner

considering the comments wanting more and longer, I would agree very good world building and we wait with an-tica-pation.

J.R. Turner

Bet John will push all of the Umara's squad up in levels with his ability to teach. And I hope we get a Bazoka or tomahawk missile or three, and for him to have the ability to hand off those weapons for a short time. We can dream since he is now Authority 7.

EvanRP007

I can’t wait to see how John has scaled

Not_a_Robot

😂 'feed me! feed me!' Go get some milk. This was a good chapter, ppl wanted more of John's friends and Spade delivered

john Vargas

Longer chapters please.

Kevin Baldwin

Nice work keep up the great story!

Evan malachai

spade usually puts a lot of effort into the thursday one, stop complaining and just be grateful.

Jarvalicious

This is why you’re not writing this 😁

Jarvalicious

There was an entire dedicated section of the fortress for working on the advancement iirc

Dakota Buelt

I’ve been thinking he should be able to subconsciously work on his advancements with his second spark inside the fortress right?

Lee Smith

The struggling one would creep out John?

small_brain_boy

Nah I feel like Harsha would creep out John. He also a faithful boy

Joseph Underwood

Where is the rest of this chapter and if that is actually all there is why is it here? This should of at least went through to their arrival at the dropzone or settling into the base. Otherwise it is just time wasting fluff. I would have rather read John just give her the hat when she arrived in front of everybody and the other two throw away characters intros at the same time then just get to the battle and stop right after or right before some new powers are put to practical use. What a waste.

João Daniel Fonseca Freire

How we will get to see Jonh mowing The Scourge with a M134 minigun???

Grey Knight Lord

I can’t wait to see what John can do at authority 7. With his two sparks and mind palace, tier 8 shouldn’t be too far off.

Lee Smith

I have a feeling Harsha is the one Umara has to look out for.

Jonathan Berner

Wonder how Jaya caught a bullet to the back of the head… didn’t know the scourge had guns

J.R. Turner

Here is to hoping the Scrouge will get to see the Human Calamity Squad up close and personal. Armored Tank division reporting for duty.

Cjmix

I wonder what she learned from being so high in the air....

small_brain_boy

Fuck I can't wait to see those 3 in action to see what they've grown into. So much destruction is about to be seen.

Erica Robbi

Thin Lizzy's The Boys Are Back In Town meet's the A-Team! I can't wait for Tuesday's and Thursday's!

Jarvalicious

Thank you for the continued great work

Rcmrocks

Great set up for the awesome shit to come

TangiblyTrashy

The witch hat is a blessing, can't wait to see how John reacts to her wearing it.


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