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【EN, 中】Halloween ：Blood Moon (9min)
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【EN】https://vimeo.com/640791068
【中文】https://vimeo.com/640802015
"There is a scary story about Halloween blood moon. During this period of time, there are 5 demons from the hell will come to earth to seek for young lady body, especially those ladies who walk in the dark alone. They will use candy as lure during this time, just be careful, don't let your girlfriend walk alone in the dark during this time. "
“万圣节血月有一个恐怖的传说。在这段时间里，会有5个来自地狱的恶魔来到人间寻找年轻貌美的少女进行交合，尤其是那些独自在黑暗中行走的女孩们。他们会用糖果作为引诱，小心点，这段时间不要让你女朋友一个人走在黑暗中。”
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Comments
Nikraria
Hey, I just agree with everything the rest of the kindly fellows said to you, I just wanna say thanks for your hard work, I'm pretty sure this will be better and better!
Thanks MIC MIC for the suggestion, will try my best next time.
MIC MIC
Nice episode.I'm not so much in these type of things ( masquerade ),but it was good.I agree with suggestion that other patreons gave you about adding more dialogues.It would be also a nice idea they ask Sarah to dance for them and make a striptease.And I'm still waiting for sexy lingeries ( stockings,garther belt,high heels sandals,etc... )
Thanks, next will back to Hot spring series ; )
Rizo
Brilliant! A few things: When you transition from her having clothes on and then the next shot she's naked, maybe have small text like "let's get these out of the way." When they first have her in one of the scenes have her saying "I promise I won't feel good James" Adding these little bits of dialogue makes the whole thing flow better. THe text in it was okay, it's just the little things like adding how she is feeling or what's going through her head and the other characters heads at the time of her getting played with. But overall I enjoyed it and I'm excited to see what your next project will be. :)
What do you think about the dialogues in the video? Anything that I can improve with?
ThorMcBalbo
Nice job! you know what your videos lack a little bit of? dialogues, I personally think that in cheating & ntr scenes dialogues are really important, maybe even more important than the actual sex
