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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 46

🕑 Added 2024-10-21 15:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Austin Wolf

It's kinda funny that at the end of book three we asked for more spicey but we ended up with less spicey although tbh if you don't want to write it then don't it'll only feel forced if you do

jmundt33a

Why’s he channeling Gandalf with his warnings here? Inspired by E’s name?

Vorsayo

Also might be the perfect opportunity to cement Carter’s rule over them with a political marriage to the leading kingdom’s princess. Hint, hint, 😉, 😉

Vorsayo

So Carter is about to gain his first vassal world I guess 😆 you don’t just get to be that big of a hero to a entire world without repercussions, like the people being willing to follow you into any battle and ask you to rule them. At least that’s how it always seems to work in fantasy.

jmundt33a

Please remember to make Princess E’s name consistently so you can keep this as an homage. Safety precaution.

Nate Steadman

Ya gotta love it

Nate Steadman

It may be cheesy but it still is classic fantasy

Julian Lachner

Or is is sarcasm?🤔

Ens Ui

Fine, the video games got me lol. With so many good games to play.

Marvin

I would if I could! I did do daily releases for the last book... but that was a lot of work and I've got a lot of video games to play every day. I'm working myself back up to it.

Marvin

I think it was supposed to be flush rather than blush. I'll fix it now.

NovaZero

Huffed, blazed, reddened? Twitched? Blew a blood vessel?

jmundt33a

There’s one other spot that should be too instead of to.

NovaZero

still to slow > too

jmundt33a

Awesome.

jmundt33a

Maybe flushed? Incensed people can redden or swell.

NovaZero

Just a request: please define the prince's anger differently as describing it as a blush is more bashfulness instead of heated or being enraged :o

Ens Ui

Post daily lol

Marvin

We will see the world again after this quest. Probably not for a book or two.

jmundt33a

Nah. Different demon. Different Lich King. Different idiot. I expect it’s the lord of the poorest region sick of being mocked. But there are strong parallels.

Justin Webb

I like the change of pace. I hope he can stay in contact with this world when he returns home, they would be great and loyal allies after he saves their world.

jmundt33a

Excuse me? That doesn’t sound like what he’s done…ever.

George Clark

Glad he’s finally doing things for himself instead of depending on his women and friends.

ArbabSB

Looking forward to seeing what rewards Carter gets for this. Damn, the Lich King. Looks like Carter will indeed have to go through that gauntlet again. Dramonar is the idiot I presume.

jmundt33a

Good chapter. Eager for Wednesday.

jmundt33a

Should be impatience. Impatient-ness is not a word. Should be midst, not mist. You have it twice. You also forgot to capitalize Tormentor that last time. Should be a Mana Bolt. Not an.


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