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B4C40 - Commune

🕑 Added 2024-08-15 02:00:03 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

He needs to take into account that he can be discovered and attacked at any time now - so working himself to mindlessness doesn't make sense. If he loses the chance at revenge because he could not keep awake and function and thus died to a newly Classed Level-1, that would be pitiful.

Suastes Jiménez Miguel Angel

It's sad that Tyron doesn't want to dream about the "good old days."

Lucas Gulick

This was an amazing chapter, I do think this line could be changed a little: No matter how upset he was, he would always turn, immediately, whenever either of his parents spoke those words. It reflects a level a maturity that doesn't really exist in children, if was a bit more angst about it before 'sullenly' watching (and then viewing it with awe) it would better reflect a developing mind I think

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!


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