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Chapter 1570 - The Wall 

🕑 Added 2025-03-25 06:08:46 +0000 UTC

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Brian Schwab

Thanks for the chapter. It seems RinoZ had fun writing this one but might have rushed through a bunch of typos/errors I mentioned below. This looks like a typo: “Mandiles to the rock, they dug and shaped, clearing space, demolishing rooms and opening a path to the outer wall.” Where it should be mandibles. And there’s an extra ‘k’ in magic in this sentence: “As they used magick and mandibles to break down what they had already built, the scale of the issue became more and more apparent.” And I believe it should be core shapers not shapes in this sentence: “At some point, core shapes with teams of the blobby, cheerful wuffers appeared, throwing them ahead of the carvers to try and cleanse any corruption, but it wasn’t enough.” And I think both these ‘joins’ were supposed to be joints in here: ““The problem is, we need to break the wall down until we find the joins, then we can replace the damage from there.” “How far apart are the joins?”” And there’s a tense issue in this sentence: “There was no answer to that question. The healers worked swiftly, but wasn’t halfway done when the next section was exposed.” Where “wasn’t” should be “weren’t”.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

taukid

I'm pretty sure the 5th's mana just kills you, on order to corrupt someone the Krath need to take them back to base and throw them in some sort of corrupting put or something like that

Fabian

Its Krath though. I think its falling. Its definitely falling now.

Fabian

Thanks for the long chapters! This. Is. WAR. A clash of civilizations. God, I hope Smithant wasn't turned right there, giving Theorazzin an eye in the fortress.

CallMeTee

The line is: "Mandibles burning, Solant consulted with the other carvers."

CallMeTee

There's a typo/error in the middle where Smithant suddenly becomes Solant.

alt31415

THE WALL NO MAN ON EARTH CAN MAKE IT FALL

guvvuf

In story, living stone is an actual material I think? Neat information, though, thanks!

Buck

All Hail, Smithant! All Hail the Carvers! Glory to the Colony!

John Pratt

This is a little bugbear of mine, so forgive the pedantry. A lot of people use the phrase "living stone" as a poetic turn of phrase. The problem is that it actually means one of several specific things and none of those things apply here. There's the Biblical meaning, which is a pun that Jesus makes when Peter delares him to be the son of God. Peter(actually Petra, but that's too foreign sounding for King James) means "stone" in Greek, so Jesus says "And you are Peter(stone) and upon this stone(Peter) I will build my church." Thus Peter is the living stone. There's also a type of plant that camouflages itself as a rock, those are called living stones as well as fossils of those type of plants. Then there's the big one. Tolkien referred to living stone fairly often when he described Dwarven holds. This use is talking about sedimentary cave systems with water in them. This is living stone because it's constantly changing as water picks up bits of rock in one place and drops it in another. Worked stone that's been toughened against erosion and sandwiched between plates of metal is not living stone. That stone is as dead as rocks can be.

BelligerentGnu

I appreciate this comment, because I'd forgotten that.

RinoZ

We know smithant survives everyone. This is a completely false cliff!

Rick Delallata

The ants always show such determination. They'd work themselves to death and it's both really cool to see and really tragic

Brandon14754

I hope smithant is okay

Deathburn

I hope Smithant isn't dead. I think there was an excerpt from her that implied the eldest was asleep, though, so she shouldn't be. Hopefully


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