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Book 5 - Prologue (cont)

🕑 Added 2025-01-23 07:17:00 +0000 UTC

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Suastes Jiménez Miguel Angel

Arihnan the Black had 100 levels or more, sure that a Tyron of a level 70, maybe, could learn even something from his last writings. Yor and Dove, Filetta and Dove, Dove always has interesting interactions with females, and now that he's undead the females hate him even more. And I love it. How old was this time leap?

Gonvas

Tyron was killing tons of riftkin months on end. I think it was less than a year that he went from lvl 40 to lvl 60. With the exception of years training his 2nd subclass, Tyron spent his time researching necromancy and fighting. I don't think the old Necromancer was able to freely kill his way in Granin from Iron rank. I think the fall of cities and towns came when he was already at a high rank (gold or above).

alt31415

"Nonstop" I don't think you understand quite what that word means.

alt31415

But let's be honest: He was not butchering scores of outlying towns to powerlevel his Necromancer class. Compared to what ol' Ari did, he probably took his sweet time.

Gonvas

Tyron was not slow at all. He became a gold at 24 years old. And he didn't touch his main for a few years (3/4 years).

Pandelion

I agree, it's a nice change from all the typical story where 5 books go by and it's only been like a year in the story, the passing of time and all the preparations and training that have to happen offscreen give the impression that it's really an epic adventure that spans years. I very much like when stories are not afraid to have time pass and I fully support the decision despite all the complaints in the comments.

alt31415

Not surprised tbh. It's implied Arihan gained his levels by doing the whole 'butcher outlying towns and raise them enmasse' rather than Tyron's slow-and-steady.

Greyg

He entered the dungeon below harvesting gold slayer bone archive that for whatever reason the duke kept and his Arcanist master windhelm he didn’t speak to him just waited till he died likely took his body and soul that’s about it the gold slayers and others killed the nobles and the duke off screen/page

stubs

Tyron casually dissing the *former* greatest necromancer of all time's work as "basic" 😂

Apotheosis

...poor Arihnan, he really tried his best

Charles

Honestly this is very well done narrative work. The whole notion that this big bad necromancer from the days of yor has been built up as supremely dangerous and powerful then we find his tomb and our guy is all "this guy was a bit of a novice tbh" is great show rather than telling about where he's now at skill wise.

Kyle Cunnane

I assume that all of that will be explained in the first couple chapters, and the prologues chaps are just giving us a glimpse into the most important things that happened during the time skip. My hopeful prediction is that he’ll be doing something in a workshop and casually talk to the skeleton of the baron or whilheim (I don’t know how to spell it off the top of my head) and that’s how we’ll know what happened to them

Dylan Alexander

What happened to storming the Dukes castle?

Navarog

This could be basic, because it wasn't Worth to hide it, or take it.

Amari Charles

I’m gonna go against the grain a bit and say that I like the time skip. I think that all of the things mentioned in the comments would be fun to see, but also there is so much ground to cover that it might slow the pacing way too much

Dan K

Feels like we missed something in the sand people village. And the founding of whatever settlement that they mentioned. When did he meet back up with Dove? Is this the thing where you show the future in the prologue and then backtrack? Just rather confused. As a standalone I did like the chapter, enjoying that while he might find some useful information in the scrolls, it’s nothing revolutionary.

Tesset

Good one 😂 Yeah after the end of the 2nd book it has been non stop time skips…

Greyg

Sure foreshadowed, but not setup well a chapter before this would be far more readable/enjoyable a chapter with his students before and/or after this chapter would tie it all together currently its messy time-skipping another thing handed to him on a silver platter off page (plot armor)

Ignacio Fuentes Álvarez

Well this is doubly true, since Arihnan was a mage with no near the level of insight of Tyron, who is just a freak of nature, couple with what you said, less ambient magic means more difficulty at casting, remember that some rituals needs to be cast inside a rift for there is so much magic inside, plus necromancy is not a legacy studied and passed down the generations, the insight of Arihnan belongs to him alone, the same way the knowledge Tyron has has been built by him alone, with some help here and there yes, but the heavy lifting has been just Tyron

GoGoGinger

Personally not a big deal to me. I get it but also it was foreshadowed heavy last book that this was the direction he was heading next.

Zen-RPG

Wich is sensible and accurate. What could be revolutionary then would be mundane now. But you always do expect in these kind of settings a kind of lost knowledge that flips on its head whatever modern ideas you'd have. Wait and see maybe the more precious and usefull knowledge is stored in another place

Kain

Eh I think it more just that Tyron is a freak of nature magical genius so even “the best necromancer in history” just had shit comprehension and insight compared to him.

Pandelion

Ok, you get an internet point, that made me laugh.

Greyg

If Tyron ever decides to replace his forbidden one sub class he definitely unlocked time magick with all these time skips

TPG

yeah, it makes sense though. Of the tomb is pretty worthless, it would suck to spend 6 chapters of tyron searching, only to get no payoff

DagNabItAll

Dove is the best

Brandon14754

I would like to say magic comes from the rifts and as they get bigger there's more magic also new magical discovers could lead to what used to be state of the art information hundreds or even thousands of years ago to be just basic info in the present

Rylie Harris

think you uploaded the wrong chapter bucko

Greyg

He likely died a second and final time since he was a lich somewhere in the central empire the same one where the emperor/golden legion sits at this is more of his workshop/study being an undead tomb works just fine over the barrier mountains further west of the western province

Vora_Vixen

Hmm one skip is one thing but another right after really doesn't flow well. Leaves readers feeling like they missed a lot of chapters.

Greyg

The timeskips are brutal disjointed reading im sorry i love the story, but man its hard to enjoy these last two chapters. Necromancy beetles we get nothing of substance then cutoff for another timeskip if there was a chapter before this with his students and then dove gave him the location of the tomb it would flow better feel better as a reader

Runaway_Cactuar

I love how Rinoz is avoiding the " ancient shit is better than modern shit" trope.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Definitely (Not) a Necromancer

Tyron is a deft Golf hand

Bernhard Höhmann

This is really good but I feel like we missed so much! Also: is tomb the right word here? Arihnan's body isn't there, right?

Highfist

I had to go back and make sure I didn’t miss a chapter because I was not expecting dove to appear nor the tomb to be found so fast

Buck

TFTC!

CentaureHeart

I'm curious about a billion things that happened offscreen. Like his actual reunion with Dove, his Heart, his Students, his childhood friend, his meeting with his aunt, the run from Kenmore, what he got from the dusk people, if he got the spirits of Master Wilhelm or the other apprentice. I'm forgetting some. Super fun chapter though! Thanks :)

Gunmetalrhino

The real last words of the chapter: "Arihnan the Black was just a basic bitch necromancer!"

Andrew

Thank you!

Sparaten

lol basic I wish I could see when dove saw Tyron for the first time at golf rank


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