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B3C22 - Business With the Master

🕑 Added 2023-07-31 05:17:43 +0000 UTC

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erick burleson

I got this to read chrysalis, what's this other book about

dethrothes

Literal goosebumps. Tyron truly did come into his own.

Rubeno

You are forgetting about something. Tyron is a human who has emotions and this is what makes him relatable. He is grieving son who who lost his parents not emotionless deliverer of justice who lost his humanity along the way because author wanted to make main character look good. Don't degrade his resolution to "just revenge". In fact last paragraph showcase Tyron's character growth. He is in the middle of his journey and I'm stoked to see how he will develop.

Rubeno

On the other hand highly talented individuals may simply hide away how many mysteries they may have. Especially since the comment came from the Noble and Nobles are as much hated by Slayers as Magisters.

Yshua

I’d leave it at one simple sentence at end maybe? “He wanted revenge.” Or something else to increase the succinct, punctuation feel of the the last paragraph. Is it just revenge? Is there no justice or righteousness to Tyron’s cause? The magisters are evil and must be stopped, and the new gods deserve to be overthrown. The last two sentences adding detail of revenge make Tyron’s resolution seem less impressive not more.

Joakim Berube

Something that’s not being mentioned is how much perspective this chapter put on things. Master Willhem, one of if not the best enchanter to appear in the province, is said to have one, maybe two mystery while our boy Tyron who is barely beginning to dig in to his craft has two and his monster of a father had nine of them

Rohan Behl

I like to think of this master as this physically frail but politically ruthless and calculating man just playing grandfather as he nears retirement. It couldn't have been easy suppressing every single arcanist to dominate the market. I expect to see him recognize the work done on one of the skeletons in the future.

FishFace

It really is a shame. In a better world it may have happened, alas.


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