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B3C5 - Rumblings

🕑 Added 2023-05-23 04:44:15 +0000 UTC

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RinoZ

Give it a little time! Still scene setting

kalada William-jumbo

I like this idea as well … in fact I’m more for your idea than my idea. I’ll ship that … grave robber girl it is!!

Suastes Jiménez Miguel Angel

It's nice to see Elsbeth again. Although I would like you to go a little deeper into her evolution over the years.

Maximus

I like Elsbeth's part in the story, but I'm totally against her and Tyron being a thing. It's been shown that she's not into him so it would just feel like pure plot bringing them together. Plus it gives the opportunity for new female characters to be explored through a romance with Tyron. Being locked out of romance by the narrative until he and Elsbeth are brought together by the plot would be really boring imo. He's got grave robber girl wanting him and he works with an ultra sexy vampire woman for god's sake. Let our boy be free.

RinoZ

I'm glad you said that. I kind of wanted this story to have no good guys. We don't often get straight 'good v evil' in reality, usually 'sucky v less sucky'. For this story, I wanted the various factions to basically be acting selfishly. Even Tyron is acting selfishly.

Nathan Quitugua

It never fails...greed will always consume the top of the pyramid and make them blind to the growing rage around them. They think they are so secure in their power up until the storm around them finally converges and crushes them under its heel.

Nathan Quitugua

I personally like Elsbeth. All her life she has just wanted to help people. She's a kind hearted person who gets hit with probably the worst challenges that would break other people and yet she will persevere...hopefully with that kind heart still intact. But the thing about people like that is when they do finally snap under the weight of the world, they will burn everything and anything around them as a consequence. No one will remember Elsbeth...the kind hearted; Elsbeth, the saint of the wintry mountain...all they'll remember when she breaks is Elsbeth the Calamity, Elsbeth, the Herald of the Three. Either way, i like her, and her naivete.

alt31415

I don't think it's so bad. Not everyone is the super-badass who carves their own way and doesn't answer to anyone. I'd wager none of us commenting here fit that description; we all have bosses and people to answer to one way or another. Elsbeth's bosses happen to be cruel and egomaniacal gods.

Seeker10

Tyrion - God of Death will be a new Pantheon

alt31415

Man, the gods have a bad case of Everyone Sucks Here. Not just the 5, but the 3 as well. Well done making this Pantheon!

CentaureHeart

It's good if the Magisters can just be stupid enough for long enough

Zenty

No Thanks. Dove and the skellys are more than enough as is.

Olavi Kaukamieli

He does have plans. He is obviously not gonna wreck the city as silver. Last chapter he said: "Perhaps when I return to hunting rift-kin, that will suffice." He knows the rift is a source of power, so this time he will be ready to tap it. Though... He might not be so close to it now and I don't think he goes through the same one again. But it would tie well to this chappy.

Dragon Commands

But… Tyron’s no longer nomadic? How can she travel with a guy who’s set up a nice life for himself in a city which he has no plans on leaving until he crushes everyone in it under skeletal heel?

SwiftFate

Why would he want to share his burdens with Elsbeth of all people right now? She betrayed him, slept with the dude who blatantly bullied him despite knowing how he felt about her and contributed to the death of his parents in doing so. He may forgive her, but I doubt he'll ever be close to her again.

Sean Hibbitt

Thanks for the chapter!

Greyg

Skeletons carry the burdens

kalada William-jumbo

Can the ship set sail? Can we get Elsbeth to start traveling with Tyron already … I’m in need of someone Tyron can share burdens with.

SwiftFate

Forgot about Elsbeth. Not my favorite character on account of her being such a sheep, even now she follows the whims of others rather than dictate her own path. But I'm glad she has a role to play. I suspect later one Tyron will have need of a more social aspected character to handle certain things for him.

Faolen

Double, double, toil and trouble. Fire burn and cauldron bubble.

Crazy Abe

Alright, just start piling the refugees like firewood in this corner over here…

Koala Man

:)

Haridya Iyengar

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