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🕑 Added 2023-04-07 08:08:04 +0000 UTC

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Marter

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

DeadSlime

I like this ending it’s a bit traumatic but it’s satisfying end for the pair and a good way to let Tyron move forward.

Academic

God, that really was the only way out of it huh. Fuck really well done.

Ren

I didn't see that coming. Any of that. Rinoz, you are amazing.

Kirania

/me looks around... "Who is cutting onions around here?"

Riley, Glutton of All the Foods

Just binged both books over the last few days. Have to say, I love this story. I can't wait for book three! I feel like his parents' deaths seemed a bit rushed, but that probably has good reasons behind it that may be revealed later. All in all, I am thoroughly hooked.

Anki

That's fair, I just wish we had a bit more dialogue with Tyron offering them potential solutions that don't involve suicide, and then his parents explain why his solutions won't work. I think it also would've been a bit more powerful if we see Tyron desperately offering potential ways out and gradually coming to terms with the fact that there is no alternative and his parents can't avoid their death. BTW, I'm not saying the scene was bad or that I disliked it, just offering my 2 cents.

CentaureHeart

I think for us they resorted quickly to suicide because we had few chapters with them. But basically since the first time we saw them, they knew they were condemned and that it was the only way out. They tried everything to get rid of the brand and it lead to that, I'm pretty sure they then tried everything to not kill themsleves, but when Tyron Awakened as a Necromancer it was already the only solution, as frustrating as it is.

Anki

Wow, this was not a fun ending to book 2. I absolutely loved Dove's character. Tyron's parents were also one of my favorite sets of parents in any fiction story I've read. They really had such an aura of mystique and charisma about them, a wild/adventurous and even irresponsible side juxtaposed by their parental love for their son. I'm really going to miss their chapters and POV. I do look forward to seeing Tyron grow more powerful and eventually get revenge on the Magister system. I hope his progression isn't rushed though, seeing him gradually fighting rift kin and getting stronger is great to read. One thing that felt a little off was how quickly the parents resorted to suicide. It felt like they didn't really address all their options. I didn't totally understand the fear of letting Tyron contain their souls like he did with Dove (how could they be captured, what would happen if they were?). I guess they were truly at the end of their rope with fighting the pain from the brand? Tyron has truly had a rough journey so far. By the way, I like how you hinted at Tyron's class being Necromancer due to outside influence in the Magister chapter where the woman states how they wanted this situation to lead to the deaths of Magnin and Beory. Great job there. It's going to be painful waiting for chapters to come out.

Anki

I was one of the ones who called it way back because some of the dialogue seemed super suspicious to me, like when the parents said "I want to see my boy" and the father replied "you know we can't see him until the end". I never wanted it to happen, but had a fear that it would based on chapters with such a dark tone like the one I mentioned.

Nathan Quitugua

Someone honestly called it WAY back when in the early chapters when they said tyrons parents were going to die. I just didnt think itd be so close to him losing Dove as well. Like thats honestly a double whammy of loss. Now the only person left in tyrons corner is elsbeth and tbh shes just...too naive. She needs to attend the school of hard knocks before shes of use to anyone. But goddamn tyron...this is spiderman levels of trying to do the good thing ends up killing your family levels of bs but god it was so good.

Nathan Quitugua

....thats...thats exactly what happened. Did you not read the chapter with the old gods explaining how the divines came to be and the cost to become gods was someone had to become the dead god of magic.

Rahsheem Reid

I made a comment that his parents made a deal with the scarlet court a while back. And it looks like the such has happened.

TheRNGenius

Holy shit, those we re some sky high cliffs you prevented us from. And the feels and the drama. Im so mad at that shit world and have a piece to say to those friendly divine chucklefaces! Really well written, Rino! Enjoyed the hell out of it!

Fistro nio

I expected this to happen to his parents.. It was the only way out. But why also Dove 😭

Sarah Stillman

Seriously, great chapters but poor Tyron. I so wish he could have kept their souls around, especially as he's now without Dove. The twist with the divines meddling with Tyron's ritual and the reasons behind it are amazing. I'm guessing the divines used to be humans who increased in power so much they became gods, now they're making sure that no one else is able to do the same to them... which is what was pretty much exactly what was written out.

Sarah Stillman

I say this with the most respect possible: Fuck you.

Michael Kelly

You did a great job with these chapters. Head is spinning. It’s heart wrenching for Tyron, he is truly alone now. An unmarked, and vengeful, necromancer with a bone to pick with the system and nothing to lose….. sign me up. Stay strong Tyron!


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