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BoD B2C14 - Distance

🕑 Added 2022-08-16 08:15:24 +0000 UTC

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chris

especially in a dark realistic no nonsense story like this. tho it popping up here and there can b nice, so long as it doesnt get in the way or at least without noticeable progress and good excuses and usually backing off after realizing the sort of backward absurdity it has. that kind of innocence can sort of b good yet absurd in other ways. like the obvious points tyron said but also didnt detail how abhorrent the bandits really become and deserving much worse than yor gave monty. innocence just sugarcoats the bad, nearly the entire lives of the bandits were worthless without tyron getting some good use out of them to do some good. hopefully elsbeth follows tyron, whether by his side or intermittent meetings and help as the split up and see each other again.

Ironwood

Yeah, nothing wrong with pulling a Bel’akor so long as you don’t get too big for your britches and get smote(like Bel’akor)

RinoZ

I posted it in the discord

Michael Kelly

Dove is a great opportunity to unleash colorful insults, I like the way he’s headed. Hope elsbeth pulls her head out of her ass soon. Naïveté gets annoying after a while

Rahsheem Reid

For sure! I can say him holding out was the best bet he could have made. He might even stand too gain more minions if he keeps doing so.

Rahsheem Reid

She was probably mad y’all weren’t throwing dick jokes at her. 😭

Rahsheem Reid

@David Ford EXACTLY! At this point all we need is dead bodies of we can get some xp off killing them great but give me a intact corpse and we will get too work.

Aaron Archer

This was a great turning point for Tyron. It would also be good for Tyron to get some more info on the Old Gods but from what I can see, he holds a lot more cards in not choosing a patron in order to improve his relative position. Perhaps an Abaddon like co-mingling of the three. They all require a champion, and what better vehicle to invest in but this necromancer and an actual Priestess of the Old Gods guiding him.

Anthony Taylor

MOAR!

Edward

You missed it

David Ford

You gain minions

Patrick

Great chapter and great character development for both, hope things are going well on other side of house with editing books. Don't know if I missed it but you said u would show us the first version of the book cover for Tyron.

Seamole

Finally. A good chapter with no big questions at the end. I can rest in peace this week

troy wolfe

Great work it would be amazing if you can have a mass release once all editing is done for your books.

stubs

elsbeth is so eager to gloss over realities she rather not know about and pretend to be daft.

Touch

Elsbeth.... hmmmm I wish she got out of old god influence and enter under the abyss or something, then accept tyron and create romance. Unfortunately... logically i don't think she'll ever be able to escape it, she's now just a tool....man....

Thunderhoof

Man, Elsbeth gets under my skin. Makes me remember one of my classmate from highschool, she was like the class president type. When me and the boys were throwing dick jokes at each other she'll repremand us. But after our vacation and the start for our 4th year. We just received the news that she got pregnant during the break. Freakin hypocrite man.

Nathan Quitugua

To some extent...I see why she's so dead set on still treating them as human. Even if they were deplorable rapist scum...you gain nothing from stooping to thier level...

Rahsheem Reid

This is so greatttt. I knew our boy had hardened up and it’s good too see he is a lot more outspoken I think Dove is starting too wear off on him.

Arillius

Wow, Elsbeth is still surprisingly naive. Great chapter!


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