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Chapter 1029 - Far Ranging

🕑 Added 2022-08-12 01:52:53 +0000 UTC

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Robinn57

So how did you get experience from her pet? Did she upgrade the skill that allows pets to get experience faster?

Edgar Delibo Jr.

I LOVE THIS! GIVE ME MORE PLS GIVE ME MORE, MORE, MORE, AND EVEN MORE

guvvuf

There’s a typo - “rendevou” to “rendezvous”

Greyg

The core shaper should really just fall right into the lap of the sophos, but that’s just my own greedy hope

Runaway_Cactuar

2 weeks later: Anthony- man, what a relaxing evolution! So what'd I miss? everything is on fire*

Deltoren

i thought this was the first one i cant remember any other columbant stories

Dan K

I don’t think pets are forbidden by anyone to my knowledge. They are just seen as inefficient due to the vast amounts of cores and biomass they need to evolve and advance. The problem the old races had with the termites was they weren’t ‘pets’ they were wild monsters the kaarmodo had guided and shaped but without bonding them.

InfernalDrake

Looks like another wave is coming.

Thunderhoof

Is it forbidden for humans to manipulate monsters core and make pets? Does the old race forbids it?

Thunderhoof

RinoZ: Magellant Filipinos at March 1521: *sweat profusely

Rick Baker

@Brandon Rath Yep. That's what I mean by pacing. Some authors think it's a good idea to shift away from the rising action of the story to an unestablished character. For entire chapters. Worse a lot of the times the side character's story isn't remotely relevant to the current plot. I have no idea why they think this unconnected side story makes for a good cliffhanger or builds anticipation. It just feels like filler and only makes me bored with the MC and the author. I find that I much prefer authors that manage to find natural pauses in their main stories to build and/or revisit side characters. But some can't get that pacing down.

Brandon14754

It also does help that there was a nice breaking point due to evolution, though I still to go back to see how everyone reacts to his evolution and mutations

Rick Baker

I know I'm reading a great original fiction when I don't mind spending time away from the MC to read about side characters. Think it comes down to pacing. Hard for some stories to even keep me engaged with their MC let alone any side tangents they feel like going on. Not so with this story. It's among the best. This was another great addition to this world.

Isiah Debarros

Great now I'm invested. I'm going to need more of them

Rahsheem Reid

Tftc

Titaniumtac

Thx for the chapter

Khalil Redd- Gomez

Mini Eldest

Quinton Thornes

Uuhhoohh... Looks like the Third Wave is starting. Hope Anthony wakes up in time.

troy wolfe

I love this side story


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