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BoD B2C7 - Reap the Harvest

🕑 Added 2022-06-30 12:02:46 +0000 UTC

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chris

ur fastest and best work is done when in ur best condition. so simply put, 1st 2nd and 3rd priority should b ur health and family. so take ur time and do ur best to get well for urself and ur family more than for us. well b here when u get back but till then put both novels to the back of ur mind and if ur up for it make a chapter per week at most. hopefully ur back in peak form in a week or less but if not its not a big deal at all. thank you very much for such masterpieces! :) <3

Maplanic

{crossed them out and stated over again and again.} should be {'started' over again and again.} Also potential grammar improvements? but i'm not an expert in the english language so it may be fine. {Should he be creation new minions right now?} would be {Should he be 'creating' new minions right now?} {He wanted to see the results of his current tests as his next round of skeletons.} might be {He wanted to see the results of his current tests 'with' his next round of skeletons.} The other might also be correct, again not an expert in english but it sounds better to me. Other than that seems fine to me.

Tyrunex

Fake it till you make it

jonathan Wieringa

"Tyron pushed the fatigue away and worked through the night" seems like you're portraying yourself RinoZ

Vora_Vixen

Excited

Sean Hibbitt

This was a great chapter!! It felt nice and long which was great! Always feels nice to have one large chapter then lots of small ones I feel :)

H.H.W

Excellent chapter! I really loved how he finally sounded confident at the end, with the whole stand off between them, which is a nice contrast between how he has usually been acting. Oh and one more thing, what happened to Elsbeth? All we know was that she swore herself to The Dark Ones as their Priestess, and that she ran off but nothing more than that. It would be nice if we heard from her, because its obvious she'll show up sooner or later to aid Tyron.

Macronomicon

A thought. He could've claimed to have killed the women and they were the skeletons acting as his guards. How would these guys know? It take training to spot the difference between an male and female skelton at a glance, and they already think he's a psycho. That could also lead them to believe he had access to more reinforcements than he actually did, and make them hesitate. aditionally, there's always the trick of having the women dress up like zombies and stand side by side with his skellies on the wall, artifically inflating their percieved numbers. I think the solution to this problem is bullshitting his ass off.

Axon

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

Thomas Christie

Good chapter, thank you! Oh shit I get the feeling that this is going to get real nasty. I haven’t doubted Tyron’s iron will one bit as he’s demonstrated it time and time again, but that last before he spat on the road was fucking badass!

Kyle Pemberton

"Though, in a way… I feel as if he's still me. Do you take my meaning?" -&gt; "Though, in a way… I feel as if he's still with me. Do you take my meaning?"


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