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BoD Chapter 53 - Ruins

🕑 Added 2022-05-19 08:51:53 +0000 UTC

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Octaeon

That's fair, and hopefully the book will go in that direction. I don't like Yor.

Andrick

What better way to temp a young man than to send a seductress? It works in real life 🤷🏾

Aidan Mcarthur

Your isn’t fan service. She’s a psychopath who’s probably going to murder and drain people, and this series isn’t the kind to brush off the implications of having such a terrible fiend in the company of a would be hero

Runaway_Cactuar

I mean yeah, he's definitely earned that trust- but I'm saying as of now, there's nothing narratively intriguing about her. We know Ty's not interested in the Court. Yor can try to persuade him, but you can only beat a dead horse for so long. She needs a different narrative avenue to be viable in the plot.

Macronomicon

I often find myself scratching my head, wondering what the numbers do. What’s the passive drain of a skelly on his mana, what’s the active drain, what’s his regen? It’s only a minor gripe.

chris

come on guys its rinoz were talking about here. he does amazing story and his fan service is more story in various ways, bonus chaps, other characters povs and more story packed into 1 chapter and stuff. besides shes a "monster" and he prefers his monsters become more monstrous pov. i get the feeling the sexiness is just a front and there will eventually b a twist for when she has to fight shell either transform or something else but either way rinoz doesnt like the monster in human form. so shell probably show off her monstrous powers in a grotesque or monstrous way. :D <3

Runaway_Cactuar

Yeah, a Yor POV should be pretty helpful. Right now, I just don't see what she brings to the table other than bewbs

Pranshu Dhungana

This might just be a pet peeve of mine but i dont really like Yor as a character being introduced - i don't want this to be a thing where is he is surrounded by powerful "sexy" female undead or other sort of characters - I really hope that isn't the case . Would have prefered a cool vampire dude, but as long as Yor isn't used solely for the sake of fan-service and becomes a meaningful character with some depth then I will be happy :)

Isiah Debarros

What's the Image

Maplanic

you say that, but considering that we as the readers know his parents are on the case, they could literally be there to greet him in the morning as he's leaving since with how Dove and Tyron are talking i think they assume the steelarms won't be called due to the fact that calling them now would be closing the stable door after the horse has bolted. But considering that we don't know how the steelarms intend to stall for him to get more time it's a toss-up as to if staying longer would be good even if he knew.

RinoZ

I sneakily wrote part of this during a conference today... so sections weren't checked properly

RinoZ

Yeah needs an edit. I'll put in a mention of Yor also. She didn't follow due to being out in the day.

Rahsheem Reid

Dove told him too work through the night

Riprexe

Hiding I presume, you know since it was daytime and she's a vampire

ManguKing

People dont forget that yor is a vampire, and the chapter is happening during the day. Feel like he should at least scout deeper into civilization and see how far have the kin pushed through. Maybe they could actually stay longer in this town

seth dauer

It's daylight, she can't be out and about

Greyg

Creating a legion is difficult work

Rahsheem Reid

Where is Yor?

ParoxysmDK

Tftc, the chapter needs a pass over for typos and grammar. Also why and when did yor leave? Wasn't she supposed to protect her ladys interest ie. Mc-kun ?

sebsebs

Thanks for the chapter ! Did they leave Yor behind?


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