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BoD Chapter 44 - When Worlds Collide

🕑 Added 2022-03-29 04:22:45 +0000 UTC

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Hellnhavoc

im hoping he gets over the guilt thing, hes already made the choice, best to move forward, nothing for it at this point.

Jonathan Williams

I'm such an idiot. Why am I ever here? Ever should be even.

Maxum

Difficult to do inner turmoil well. I could butterfly effect my way into being the cause of every bad thing in the world, but I have a rational mind that prevents that, so now the MC needs to be dumb for a while. Yes, emotions effect the rational mind, but there's a limit. Combined with tween thoughts of sacrifice a la Jesus...bit grating, both the first time and now in this chapter. It briefly touched on being able to do more good by retreating and fighting another day and it would've been great having that explored further, with the desire for self preservation and doing good thrown in the mix. Perhaps a bit of anger against the Magisters for forcing him into this situation? Lots of juicy emotional content to be had without going Mr Emo Guilt Trip.

M Afxarr

Great chapter. Shows his inner conflict

BS91

I wasn't expecting a Powerman 5000 reference... but there could be nothing better.

Rahsheem Reid

Slow clap….*chefs kiss*

Dustin

I think guilt is usually what makes us make ignorant decisions. If I knew for a fact that I caused all of that, I'd have stayed a fought to the end not thinking that doing so would have made others work in vain

Runaway_Cactuar

Gotta say, I'm not a fan of the plot-induced stupidity for a typically smart and analytical character. Sure, if he was in character and just left before the Break, then we wouldn't see what it looked like. And sure, he was being emotional and guilt-ridden. But he really should've left- he simply knew better. Not letting him make the smart play really denied his character growth thus far- what was the point of all that maturing and growth if he's gonna keep making childish mistakes (and getting bailed out by plot) like this?

Patrick

Great chapter, I have a feeling he is going to get way more involved now that there is a running retreat...cant way to see

jonathan Wieringa

Nahh this was freaking epic imo

Kyle Pemberton

This felt like an inbetween chapter :(. Hopefully this is another double chapter week so we can learn what the consequences are.

sebsebs

Dove is alive <3


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