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Chapter 478 - Meanwhile, back at the colony

🕑 Added 2020-03-03 10:04:44 +0000 UTC

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Khanalas

"It would intimidating to any creature not of the colony, it certainly wasn't going to cause any fear in Vibrant" There are many options of how to fix this sentence — 'It would'->'While', or 'would'->'would be' and 'it'->'but it' for example, "The mages are the way" 'the way'->'on the way' "The colony had quickly realised that teams of ten wasn't going to be enough in the Second Strata, tier three and intelligent they may be, but the danger in this world of shadow warranted greater security" I think there should be another punctuation mark after 'Second Strata' like an M-dash or a dot. On the plot's side, love the feel of this chapter!

ZeroNoPocky

Ohh how I've longed for this

Mokka-San

Holy Moly ... Shit is about to go down O.O


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