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Chapter 403 - The church of Anthony

🕑 Added 2019-11-08 03:11:24 +0000 UTC

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Trevor

Loved the story. Just wanted to say that for all the buildup the conclusion was too quick. Grant's death was essentially off-screen and she deserved better. What was she feeling as she sacrificed herself. How did Leroy react?!? We have not yet even got a full picture of what Anthony looks like post evolution. I would love to have 2 chapters showing the battle from outside viewpoints. 1 from the colony - what are the council of 20 and the rest of the colony seeing and feeling as they watch the battle. Do they feel the energy and devotion they are feeding Anthony. Are they actively sending it? Do they feel pride, awe, ect when they look on him? And the humans. We have barely any viewpoints from them during the battle. What were they feeling when Garralosh showed up. They must have been reaching their fatigue point. What did they think when they saw the Queen – fear, amazement, ect? This is the first time they saw her post evolution too right? Was our favorite bezerker reaching her limits? And then what did they feel when they saw Anthony arise. He is bigger and even shinier now right? How did they react? How did the highs and lows of the battle impact them. When the black hole was fired off was their shock and awe? What was the priest thinking/feeling. How did Enid’s perspective change during the battle. How did the newcomers who had never seen Anthony react? Part of the fun of this story is how the humans are reacting to this new “monster” situation. And it was weird when Anthony went to the village the only person we hear from is Enid. I mean he is the size of truck now right? Sparkles like a diamond? Just single handedly killed the big baddy and send the whole horde fleeing and he is not being swarmed by the villagers the kids and the priest? I just feel that we are missing the reaction of the other ants and the humans to the evolution and the battle and I would love to see this fleshed out more.

Svensonsen

We need Ant Riders. A form of symbiosis like on earth with fungus. They could do this with builders too. It would be so awesome😂😂

ShadeByTheSea

I believe currently they are mostly just expanding the already build dungeon pathways, which they used to build their walls and ant hill/fortress. I see them either building stuff in the expanses or donating some of the materials to the humans in the future. I can see the younger ants living on or near the surface with the humans, living off the afid farms, and as they grow in age and tier migrating down.

Bob

What are the ants going to do with the mountains of overburden from mass excavation? It feels like it should be more problematic than it is. Are they turning it into bricks for the humans?

RinoZ

The Legion? Or Beyns church?

Seadrake

I can't wait to see what the response of the Wardens (or whatever their name that I forgot is).

ZeroNoPocky

Confirmed, antism is a thing, Anthony is the new God now lol


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