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🕑 Added 2021-11-06 12:31:44 +0000 UTC

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Vortozan

Brilliantly done

H

That’s ‘The Baron’ to you dale!

mike

Is that not the only time they are swapped? I missed that mistake the first time because the next lines mentioned returning from riverwatch to ravenhall. Didn't think too hard about there not being a valley or lake near riverwatch at first.

lenkite

"Nathan sighed as he looked over the valley near Riverwatch,..."

Andrew

Thank you!

mike

They were* confused a single time, unless its been edited in the last hour. It was simply aki interacting with Nathan at Ravenhall at the same time as the happenings at Riverwatch.

yannick schwende

Always nice to see the reaction other, more normal people have to Ileas work. I loved how Dale responded in particular with his thought on mindreading^^

lenkite

Riverwatch and Ravenhall are confused too many times in this chapter leaving readers scratching their head. Also why would this be held at Riverwatch ? I mean its a quaint little human town but Ravenhall should be the better location.

Hectorbeserk

you swiched ravenhall and riverwatch when you went to nathans pov

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Melting Sky

It works fine either way.

Fae called Violence is best Fae :D

I love your work and how well you seem to understand what the reader wants. Associating characters with particular places the way you have with for example Dale gives a great reason to remember locations and people. Don't wanna waffle but another great chapter thanks man.

Itsurmom

"I believe the risks are more than worth the potential benefits.” Think you switched risks and benefits.

Zachary Smith

These are my Saturday morning cartoons lol

Martin Brandel

Thats litteraly what i said

Zachary Smith

Yeaaaaaahhhhh!!!!!


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