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Infrasound Berserker - Chapter 26 Beans

🕑 Added 2021-10-21 13:42:58 +0000 UTC

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fbt

Steven; well, yeah, it read a bit that way to me, too, but there could be so many possible reasons and it wasn't a big thing, just a tiny bit odd. And I haven't spent time in Germany (or nearby) in decades, so my sense for it is probably off, too. I liked the story, and compared to a lot on RR...wasn't gonna mention it. ;)

Sebastian Lachs

I agree. I just started reading this story today. And it feels pretty jarring to me, considering that I am Austrian. The place names don't sound particularly German, they sound Scandinavian. I initially thought the story is based in a Scandinavian country such as Norway.

G. Harthane

Yeah, I understand the point and agree to an extent. It's just not a priority for me to make the feel culturally distinct. Otherwise I'd have chosen real places. But I understand if it's a point of critique to some.

G. Harthane

Thanks

Steven C

I think the author is Swiss - or at least that's what's said in other threads

Pierre Steiner

I do agree with you on that point, it does feel like an American survivor story set in a German sounding place, but then again how to express germanic cultural orientations when you haven't experienced them yourself? If that is the case for the author ofc

Since the first chapter, I have never seen anyone complain about it.

Steven C

Maybe people discussed it in the earlier chapters, but I can't help but notice that while the place names in this are clearly German-speaking Europe, the people names and cultural expectations seem more of a homogenized Anglo-American (with specifics and differences among the people glossed over). I guess this is the gap between the author's RL and the expected readership's? I know it's not what the story is about, but it's still jarring, as half the flavor of system apocalypse is from the Earth setting.

Noxvis

Well, now that there were a good chunk of chapters, I got around to reading all of this, and I must say, I am thoroughly enjoying it! I look forward to more! One piece of feedback for this chapter: "She opened her eyes. Her hearing cleared. Hammer, bodies, food. She went and grabbed her weapon, seeing that Ethan had finished putting out the flames. He worked together with Allison to fan the smoke out into the large cavern. Kate didn’t miss the small entrance on the other side of the hall, keeping her ears peeled. She found her bloodied weapon and grabbed it, collecting her knives in turn. She grabbed the knife stuck in the orc’s chest, looking at the tusked face of the dead creature." She grabs her hammer twice in this paragraph, once at the beginning, and once before grabbing her knives.

Clarence Bassanini

Excited every new release!

Roethan

I think it was just a reminder that it isn't a game and that they were real people. He seemed to be ignoring the dead humans and I guess she didn't want him making light of it. Maybe he was, or maybe he didn't want to deal with those emotions while they were still in danger. I don't think she should have acted that way, but I think she also realized that.

Nate

Always appreciate when this is a separate post so I get a notification. ^^ Hypocrisy points to Kate for telling Grey it's not a game, then immediately asking after game systems. I mean, she's not perfect and that's good from a character standpoint, but some acknowledgement that she took it too far and is walking it back, maybe? Iunno.

Kris Boxall

Great chapter thanks!

Alexander Dupree

She grabbed the knife stuck in the orc’s chest, The orc grabbed the knife out of its own chest right before she smashed it's head. Slight discontinuity


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