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Chapter 725 Cocks

🕑 Added 2021-07-06 15:41:37 +0000 UTC

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Juli Freixi

Thanks a lot for the chapter! 😊

Vortozan

Just blunt with your chapter names xD. Lmao never change

Null

No, because they already used that sun to create the actual body the have now.

Brecklen Want

I was expecting a chicken joke.. Nope, actual cocks.

fbt

or at some pt if there's trouble and she feels the vultures need protection. "eek, a lich! "iieee! "runnnn!" (floaty floaty floaty) "oh, Hi, I'm Owl! Lilith sent me to protect you. Oh, little level 200 necromancers, aren't you just adorable??? it's like undead kittens!"

ShadeByTheSea

I'd ship walter and owl but walter already has a sweat heart.

ShadeByTheSea

I believe they only had Lilith personally deliver letters to their allies and people with big egos. Riverwatch is an ally so they got a Lilith letter, Dawntree kicked out their big political players recently, so no one there got Lilith.

hill44

I think it would be better if Ilea just casually introduces Walter while visiting Hallowfort. Just be like, this is Meadow, Goliath, etc...Oh, and this is Owl.

Matt R.

Tbh I kinda wanted to see the Necromancers freak out about how she knows a lich. Feel like that would’ve been real fun to see.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Michael T

Good to hear you're feeling well enough to write - hope your recovery is going well!

Chopper

Perhaps Dawntree is not invited because they are a bunch of Cocks. (Not to be confused with the literal cocks in this chapter. )

Chopper

Uh, what DON'T you need a giant fusion engine for?

Atlas Dwarf

I can imagine the Demon World's star was mainly used to create/power their intergalatic teleport network. It sounded like there was a divide between the Ascended on using the other stolen star for restoring their home world or other projects, which is probably how it was able to be yoinked in the first place.

I could see Claire handling Dawntree, because she has contact with them and there isn't a central person, that can be visited. (no Alice Forkspear isn't a central person) Love your stuff, especially the upcoming diplomacy! In my opinion it's very tricky to minimise plotholes and minor mistakes, that can hinder the appreciation of the diplomacy in the worldbuilding as a whole. The lack of these plotholes in your story is incredible, especially in light of the length of the story. I appreciate that and love to further point out things, that are in my opinion underaddressed to remind you of what i feel is missing. (i know, that can be a story element, but in case it isn't...) I also hope, that you don't overcorrect, in case you want to address the point. But you could address it for example by addressing more than it (for example the state of the Independant Cities of the West in light of the upcoming turnament from Claire's view) Sry for the long comment, spamfilter is knocking... 😅

As to the letters... What about Dawntree? And is Stormbreach just going to be handled like an appendix to Riverwatch, or is it going to be included at all?

Mark

All these half elves behind masks too.

Mark

If you need a stolen star in portable form as part of your plan for world domination then you’re doing it wrong. What did the Ascended even need them for? Galactic domination?

Mark

And Ilea is Santa. All the spy services are going to be confused when they realize the letters were all delivered the same day.

Dantalia

After u are better don't forget to train your concrete resistance so u don't get any more broken bones from it. ;P

IJustWannaRead

She would flatten him…completely.

Glad to have you back! Hope you’re doing better and as always thanks for the chapters <3

mightguyishot

Omg! I MISS Hector! Hopefully she bumps into him soon! I would love a refight!

Doodlyboy15

Thanks as always

Alsia

Thank you for all the chapter :) Glad to hear your healing well! Take your time getting better, we'll still be here ;)

Brent Heustess

Two more chapters? It is Saturday after all.

Justin

Thanks!

Jachin Nelson

No I'm pretty sure he's just a high figure in that city. Pretty sure there's been no mention of him before this

Yshua

I can’t remember who Nero is. I’m assuming part of Maro and Elena’s old party?

Andy Le

It must be Christmas today, yay!!!

NFH

My half awake self thought these chapters were a dump of sex scenes for some reason. Been scared to read them all afternoon

Matthias

I'll be honest, I was expecting birds of some sort as well, as big G didn't register in my mind as someone to boldly advertise that part of human anatomy. the more you know, I guess.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

😊😊😊

Jackson Andrews

Yaaaaayyyyy so much VIOLENCE

Rhaegar, your determination is impressive. This unexpected flood of chapters really made my morning! Early access to your writing is well-worth the price of admission. :)

Volkiro

That chapters made my day, thank you.

Endoria

Yes, he got it all hanging out

I mean yeah she's basically a highly attractive super-celebrity. I'd think it stopped being flattering a long time ago lol.

Kristoffer

Good to hear that your recovery is going well, all the best wishes and thank you for all the chapters!

fbt

I was expecting chickens...got sausages instead. Boo! ;)

IJustWannaRead

Ilea getting asked to fuck everywhere she goes. I would be kind of flattered but also highly annoyed if that was me lmao. Downside of being beautiful and very strong and famous I guess.

Joppest

Welcome back!

Gian

It’s a wonderful day! Thank you

IWannaBeATiger

Woo friendship fists

Shin

This really is a blessing thx big G But take care and dont overtax yourselve okay?

K Hilliard

Heh, been wondering where Maro is hanging out.

Chad Hagner

Thankyou for the chapters, fantastic start to my day!

StarWolf

Thank you for all the chapters!! Glad you are on the road to recovery!

Manu Sniter

A chapter bonanza, I hope you'll heal up fully, thanks!

So as precaution just playing the unknowing fool would be a thousand times better than telling the whole world by telling Feyrair

Wasn't there some kind of understanding, that the sun shouldn't be mentioned or at the most it should be probed, because the elfs, and even or especially Isalthar know about the sun and are on the hunt for it!?

fennek

Lol, no work got done today.

Wasn't it directly hinted, that the Human-Taleen-Elf Alliance was only possible, because there were spoils in other dimensions? (Demon Realm Sun?) - Wouldn't that make it possible to be the sun of the demon realm?

Benjamin

All I saw when this chapter popped up was c**k. Anyone else?

tibbish

*delivers calcium serum*

Manamaw

༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ TAKE MY CALCIUM

Alex

Jesus, they keep coming. I'm supposed to be working

Zarik0

I have a suggestion, i think Ilea need to get training by Meadown and other about her Dominion Perception (for better evolve later or just get more powerfull now vs ward or shit sneak if she train the sensibility/controle or etc) Because she keep getting her Dominion cut off and blind by "mere" ward and stuff "low" for her level now (vs her other ability, its feel quite behind now, if she keep getting fucked over it = weakness)

Dax

Bless you, word man.

Solarnis

It's all telepathy and not speech. Likely to keep what they discussed a secret.

J Berg

Title game on point

MacDB

Why are they all talking in italics in the end scene?

Endoria

༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ TAKE MY CALCIUM

Relissi

You spoil us! A,so, good to know Maro found his hedonism buddy

Nodlehs

Get well soon, thanks for the chapters :)

Matt

6 chapters straight after surgery? Bless the author.

Zarik0

Oh My God 6 ? Jesus man, here get some calcium for you if it have this effect on you ;P


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