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Chapter 675 League of common humans

🕑 Added 2021-03-27 12:40:34 +0000 UTC

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Vortozan

Thanks for the chapter. As with everyone of them, Loved it!

Kemizle

Ian’s and the other enchanter needs to hit 200 would love to see the classes they get

DustHurricane

This is probably a case of, "If I don't have these keys, a race of machines will continue trying to exterminate an entire species, and an evil entity will have a chance to get the key instead and potentially take an entire Sun as a power source for whatever it wants" Which is a tiny bit more important than the Dwarves going, "But we like it!'

Brian P.

Ilea being willing to steal the key if they won't otherwise give or sell it to her seems weird. Previously Ilea hasn't cared too much about property but she at least tried to justify past instances of theft to herself in the 40 or so chapters before she became Little Miss Moneybags.

Endoria

Dr. Xavier's School for talented Children

Telmo Brito

Actually really excited about the new story.

Lommel

> Pace is a little fast, Yeah, he sure hit the accelerator. I think the format is an issue. When people wait for days for a chapter they expect something. It's easier to have slower pace chapters when you get a larger amount of chapters at once. On the other hand, well-made non-action/non-completely-new-thing chapters should be fine and appreciated. For Ilea, seeing the results of her actions, for example when the gates are deployed, and also the process of their introduction, or impact of the Sentinels (I liked the chapters when Ilea herself anonymously joined a lower level group). Of course, right now it's collecting the keys, that's okay, but I hope for quite a few chapters of "looking around" instead of leveling Ilea herself, at the impact of it all.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Kapelteta

Enjoying the system apocalypse story... more so than leaves anyway... just could never get into that one very much not sure why. Is it still unnamed? Also I feel like most everyone has expressed my excitement for the trials armor actually being used for something... I have to say that I'm never quite sure what ilea will pick up and actually use and what's just a collectors item for her.

Mark

Ilea’s Home for the Over-Powered.

David

Ilea observes War Machine, "Hey, I've got one of those!" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fWX41nyTIsg

DustHurricane

I mean... Probably. It was built by Goliath who is probably as good or better than the dwarves, just given age and experience

DustHurricane

Honestly, me too

Mark

I noticed reading another story that I now associate the word meadow with a powerful eldritch creature. I need to get outside more.

Lomie0

Trust, but verify by seeing how well they interact with her garden lol.

Null

With gun and all XD

Alan McBrayer

If terok can't manage an entrance I wonder in Ilea's armaments would count as a war machine

Michael C

Leaves never captured my attention. I felt it was so different it threatened AH (and not my style). This new story really hits my sweet spot and if its not so stat heavy as AH..I think it will go.fast and smooth.

Michael C

First off. You have a winner with the apoc story. Love the girls mentality. Maybe mention she was teased at fire station for being a bit disconnected during an emergency. Maybe a splash of aspergers or something. As for AH..super entertaining.. Pace is a little fast, and extra 2 or 3 chapters on the lich, meadow, vultures thing would have been great. Love we are moving to dwarves.. But don't forget to spend a chapter on the impact her choices have. Adding the lich was great...seeing the impact would have been cool. Jumping back in 3 months from now will make it hard to keep this same focus. Fyi. Just typing on mobile while wife driving.. Sorry for the disjointed post.

Mike G.

The first 2 chapters of the new project are interesting (more interesting to me than Leaves was, FWIW). I'm looking forward to seeing more!

fbt

thanks for ch2 of The New Thing. It seemed fine to me. Kate seems to be, particularly at the end, adapting faster to the gamification of her reality, while the geeky dude seems a little slower to wrap his brain around it? idk. Maybe he's just really awkward around girls, or simply ill-suited to living in the fantasy he liked to read. Who knows. He ended up in the woods holding a sword, so he must grasp the idea to some extent. I guess we'll see!

Dax

Ilea's League of Extraordinarily Powerful Weirdos

Mad Max

Looks like Ilea broke Albert.

oh yay is Goliath's Iron-Man suit finally gonna get some use?

Alsia

Thanks for the chapter :)

Nate

It'd probably be like a six hour round trip and who knows if Terok is even in good standing with the rest of his species - he could have come to Hollowfort as a criminal or exile.

Matthew D

Ilea has made her own secret club using meadows home as its base. Similar to the lily but cooler and stronger

Nate

F.L.A.M.C.H.?

BeepBoop

With their short size, probably pretty well, but I think stacking them would be a little bit insensitive :S

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapter

sharkattack

Finally, dwarf city hype! Thought she'd go back to pick up Terok for a tourist guide but guess not

Enkelados

I hope ilea will keep to her principles.

Calvin

? the first chapter is on Chapter 671

Mike G.

(Removing query about finding chapter 1 - all Patreon's search found for me was a $10 tier post, but Calvin points out it's attached to Chapter 671, at the end).

SamHawke

so you want your MCs to be murder-hobos? thats how you get cardboard cutout MCs

Ivactheseeker

Rude indeed.

Lommel

About the new story just one comment: Please, less moralizing. I bore with it through the already too many passages in AH. I would still read the new story if it's there. But honestly, IMHO it is too much. I think the people who ask themselves "Am I a murderer" when defending their life against (albeit humanoid) monsters is fringe-small - and not MC material. Morals and religion, there is something in common: Talking about it is a lot worse than just doing it. Have some faith in your readers! Don't be like those people who go to every door who want to talk about Jesus. Let the ACTS of your MC speak for themselves. Being good has nothing to do with consciously deliberating morals (and so frequently in your novels too). What exactly do you achieve, want to achieve, by showing your MCs deliberating about it? There does not seem, to be any purpose AFAICS apart from just the obvious, showing that your MCs are thinking about it. Which is meaningless by itself and does not contribute to the story. Instead, just show how they act. I mean, who apart from a certain age group in school taking such courses consciously thinks in those terms? Morals are indirectly expressed, doing it directly is just like those annoying preachers. It also does not add anything to the genre, as somebody points out below, this same thing appears in sooo many novels in this genre, pretty much identical each time too. It seems more like something you think you have to include but pretty much just copy & paste, it's no different from how it is in all those other novels.

Neric

I hope for an infiltration in the armement of trial (if I remember the name correctly)

Martin

Feedback on new unnamed story: I liked the second chapter as well. Great fight with goblin scouts, realistic carnage and aftermath. Appreciate Kate teaming up with katana wielding nerd. It is nice contrast to AH where Ilea spent most of the time soloing. Hope they will soon find a budding healer to join in

Lomie0

That's the trick, ALL liches are traumatized. The mere act of placing your soul in a phylactery is enough to break anyone.

MountainFox

I can practically hear "OREGA GUNDAM DA"

Chopper

She just has to put on the armor Goliath made for her, I bet they would let her in just to get a look at it.

Luciaron

Thanks for the chapter! Wonder how these dwarves stack up

Ivactheseeker

Silly Ilea. Just say you're 'friends' and enter.

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

Null

Beep boop beep boop LET ME IN IM ONE OF YOU...BEEP

Helios

I initially said this as a joke but the more I thought about it the more I liked the idea of Owl sticking around as a main character. Ilea being the loner with occasional team ups has gotten a little old at this point (And this was mostly due to her high leveling speed and the fact that she's not tied down by any obligations or major responsibilities so she can roam as freely as she pleases compared to others), not that I'm not enjoying it, but it'd be nice if there was a major change of some kind sometime soon (Doesn't have to be permanent either, just shake things up). So the introduction of Owl is a pretty good fit. Her level is so much higher than Ilea's that there's no worry at all about Ilea outgrowing her and leaving her behind, and she's just re-entered the world, therefore has nothing to tie her down, and she'd obviously be curious about how the world has changed since her time. So having Owl as a somewhat permanent character with Ilea is a completely viable option. This way we can see Ilea in a more intimate relationship (A relationship that isn't- "New friend, lets do stuff for a few chapters and then part ways), not a romantic relationship, Ilea has made it clear she isn't very interested, more like partners? I don't know, for some reason I found myself liking Owl a lot even though we saw barely anything of her, and due to how you wrote her and her setting, I saw a lot of potential in her as a character. This is just my opinion, I'd like to see what others think about it, feel free to tear apart my ideas, I just wanted to make my thoughts known. Cause some chaos.

bob barker

the following statement is rude, but truthful: I would recommend that the title of the next project be "The Second Story That I Thought Would Supplement Azarinth Healer But Decided Not To"

BeepBoop

Sit before their gate, and go full Annoy-O-Tron: "Beep beep beep let me in"

Martin

Plus after resocialization Lich can be appointed as head of HR department for Sentinels. It would make interviews really challenging

Tim

I was thinking the same :) 'Huh? Yeah I'm a War-Walker. What are you talking about?? That thing finally might have a use! I've been quite disappointed in the past where she didn't try it out for various things where it might have helped,

James Fotouhi

More like the Friendship League of Assorted Monsters and some Crazy Humans

Martin

It is first time I am reading a story about traumatized and socially inept greater Lich :-) When teleport is ready, Ilea can start collecting money from tourists visiting Meadow's friendly monsters daycare

Han Pol

Well if the dwarfs use a style like that. it could also be seen as somebody in a nazi tank trying to infiltrate a soviet camp if her's looks different

If only Ilea had some kind of massive suit of armor that transformed into a mini-Gundam...

Helios

Freeing a poor woman who has been trapped in a dungeon for thousands of years with an asshole and depressed guy. That's a love story in the making right there. I want a lot more of Owl.

Dominic French

Lol llea says she looking for the keys but in reality she is going around and gathering friends who can give her some resistance training. Now she has a lich that can probably get her to third tier soul resistance and Nes who can make weapons to level up her resistance further

Andrew

Thank you!

Eyes wide

Omg is she going to use the armament of trails u got me so hype right now

Rhain

Meadow's breakfast club is growing fast

Han Pol

thanks for the chapters nice slice of life this last one. Couldn't you make an extra post for the pdf's? to keep comments separated I mean.

evyatar

dwarves finally

Clara

I love how she shows up at meadow's, adds new friends to the group of chaos, and then leaves immediately

Cadastral

Doesn't Ilea have her armor? She would look like a war machine, at least.

Branek

The smile of her gave it away. It is probably terok. Either that, or she uses Goliath's armor to enter as a warmachine herself.

Brisyngr

Thank you for the chapter. Something else: could you change the leaves status on royalroad to dropped ?

MacDB

What a useful device to to take over the realm


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