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Chapter 600 Shortcuts and Ambitions

🕑 Added 2020-11-17 12:06:59 +0000 UTC

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Nocturne

Yeah, I didn’t mind the gael rescue sidetrack because it is her organization, but this baralia part doesn’t really interest me as much, doesn’t seem all that relevant (I mean, I’m sure there’s a point to it but like, just feels like Ilea’s power levels are way higher than anything she could possible encounter here... no tension at all). The other pov changes really don’t add much to the story other than fan service and seeing how mysterious Ilea looks to puny mortals

G. Harthane

Cheers, it means a lot :)

Elves are like snakes in that there are various species with varying degrees of aggression, habits and characteristics. Some can be tamed but as a whole they are carnivorous and see humans as food. Taming the odd elf does not mean taming the whole, as humans are too weak to be recognised by them, like first generation colonisers never recognised aboriginals. My point being, one doesn't let a bunch of poisonous snakes out in a busy city area and expect nothing to happen. A lady with a tamed snake around her arm is another matter, and although unwelcome to bring to a busy party, it wouldn't go down like a house on fire if she kept it under control.

Lomie0

I think he was disgusted of the blatant weakness on display more than anything.

uavgas

Congrats on chapter 600!! I still love the story!

Han Pol

Well assets gone missing and vaults broken in, one must wonder how that happened :D

Chopper

I love it when Ilea takes jobs like this, looking forward to Saturday!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Philipp Ziehe

thanks i found it :)

John Scott

I think the reason why I have an issue with it is largely because of the aborted push to 500. There was a lot of buildup to that and suddenly it just wasn’t a thing anymore. My expectations were disappointed. A smaller part is that the perspective changes are repetitive. They need to either add new information or be from a character we actually know. That last one felt like it was there for word count.

Forrest Minter

I don't mind it myself. Sometimes it's good to have a break from mindless dungeon-diving for a few chapters. And it's really only been maybe 6 chapters of character development and world building.

Forrest Minter

I bet she could manage it to some extent in ravenhall if she devoted enough resources to it, but just the attempt would probably bring multiple kingdoms/empires into open conflict with her and/or ravenhall. I just don't think people would be especially receptive to it overall.

Nate

So I know Ilea is far from the planning type, but how do you think the best way to go about promoting elvish tolerance so that she can walk around with her not-boyfriend more openly? To start with she'd probably have to start spreading information on who the Cerethil Hunters are and how they're different from normal elves, but I don't think this world has the sort of infrastructure to rapidly spread educational propaganda like that? Maybe I'm wrong, tho haha.

lenkite

I agree lets get to 500 where she can easily avoid [Bureaucratic Nonsense]. No need to flash her aura/armor. I assumed the battle would be done in this chapter, but just the introductions took that much time.

lenkite

Elven cities are likely very solitary - nowhere the bedlam of human cities. In such an environment, you would feel the dirt and smell far more. Also, this is outside of battle in a peaceful context.

Hayden Pech

Perhaps. Maybe elven cities are idyllic and clean? It isn’t uncommon for fantasy worlds. It’s possible he was expecting human cities to be more cared for sense humans live in them more.

Matthias

there's a map here pn patreon, but there's a higher quality one available on the AH discord. the ne on patreon is best fount by going to G. Harthane's patreon page, clicking the 'Azarinth Healer' tag category, and filtering by media. on discord, you'll want to go to the #art-fanart-fanfic channel and scroll through the pinned messages.

Hayden Pech

Coool. Enjoying the few slow bring-an-elf-to-town chapters :) Thanks for the chapters!! Keep up the good work :)

John Scott

I don’t mind some slice of life, but it feels like that’s all this story is now. Partially I’m disappointed, after all the build up, that the push to 500 got aborted, but this story seems to increasingly lack focus and progression. It’s not that this sort of chapter has no place, but while the past this was her downtime before the next big dungeon dive, now every time I think we’re about to get back to a dungeon we get sidetracked. I think it would be more interesting to see Ilea interact with normal people as a 3 mark than yet another sequence of being incognito, getting underestimated, showing off, and a perspective change. I’d like to see more exploration of lost and forgotten ruins- like the rot caves, with the occasional difficult fight. It doesn’t need to be power leveling grinding like the rose knights, but that sort of exploration would be a natural extension of Ilea’s character and provide plot progression.

Philipp Ziehe

hi G. Harthane, is there a map? i'm loosing track of where everything is supposed to be..

fbt

thanks for saying it better than I was about to post :)

Congrats on 600 🎉

Samuel Johansson

Chapter number DC, woo! I like Paulson but i think Fey is a bit inconsistent as a character. How is he both a bloodied warrior and disgusted of a little dirt and smell? One would think one fight with a 300+ abomination would give him perspective on what's actually disgusting

Alsia

Thanks for all of the chapters :D Congratulations on reaching 600 chapters of AH! It'S been a lovely journey so far. Keep up the good work!

Alexander Dupree

He himself had - > he had, with the rest of that sentence dropping this himself makes it a bit clearer.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters

Martin

Props to him for not needing a change of underwear when Ilea caught him falling down. Guy represents his rogue class well

Jachin Nelson

Happy 600!

Melting Sky

I imagine some of the upper level teams have started to earn enough coin to customize their gear a bit, but then again llea provided them with some pretty ridiculous equipment as a default school uniform. It seems many of them have some sort of ashen armor type skill as well.

Andrew

Thank you!

Manamaw

i think shes a bit bored and wants to have some fun thats not fighting 24/7 in a dungeon

L Pedersen

Wooo 600! Also Captain is an officer rank, so it's strange that Paulson would say that he couldn't be given a commission as an officer. Unless Captain isn't an officer rank in your fantasy world.. But it seems like it would be easier to find an NCO rank to put there instead of making up a new rank structure for the imperial army :P

L Pedersen

I'm guessing that it's the beginning of an arc, if there wasn't something damn interesting in that fort then Ilea would have just been in and out.

ChrisW

I really love those POV parts \o/

🥳🥳🥳☺️

Redbeard

Ilea's attitude and stubbornness to bring Feyrair to a human event seems a bit willful, like she's testing the limits of what she can do to upset the balance yet get away with. Long term it seems like a terrible decision, as there are undoubtedly some stronger humans out there which may not see eye to eye with her. Hector the pirate said that the Golden Lily's founders are near level 500 if not more, and he warned her of openly expressing her tolerance for Elves and other species as many in the Lily won't like it. Change must come slowly in some cases but Ilea still goes for the hammer...

Nyye

Paulson is a lad, like him hope he isnt just a oneshot character.

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

Zarik0

I like the guys, his reaction is so refreshing xD

I can't wait for Saturday now -_-''

kak

Thanks for the 600 treats! :)

crazychaza07 .

Do the medic sentinels still wear armour made from Ilea? I've not heard anyone remark about it for a while

David

The POV switch to Paulson was gratuitous. This chapter was mostly filler. Too bad chapter 600 did not have anything important or exciting happening.

Keep up the good work!

James Sheridan

What's her range on her ash anyway? It's never really mattered given her preference for cqc.

Sebastian Prue

Congrats on chapter 600! I've said it before but I love the pov changes to show us how monstrous Ilea really is. It's a good comparison for the craziness she gets herself into. Thanks for the chapters!

BrawlingBard

I'm still waiting for the first time she uses ash creation from the sky to literally blot out the sun, as an intimidation tactic.....VS. an entire city.

DNAjester

I hope there is a special for 666 (mark of the beast)

DNAjester

Noice!!! 600 super sexy

Imagine writing 600 chapters of a webficton this epic. What a legend.

Cadastral

Congrats on 600 awesome chapters!

Ulbert

ang girls

600 🥳

Ulbert

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