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Leaves of Terranthir - Chapter 13 Preparing an Expedition

🕑 Added 2020-10-15 15:52:39 +0000 UTC

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The Path

I for one felt a little disappointed we didn't follow Adrian through the discovery of the armory because I enjoy following a character through their experiences but it's not that big a deal. The chapter was great and I look forward to the rest of this story though I wish it had like 2 chapters a week like azarinth healer has 4. Maybe I just like even numbers and I am selfish and desire more chapters.

Zarik0

A little disapointed he did not get the knight in full armor (the king?) some treasure her for sure (real armor, maybe magic ring?) The fire is maybe for cremated the corpse (some group tasked to begin the clean of the town? adventurer?) if it more than 7 h for going outside town well the fire he see is big big and maybe the little camp fire doesnt see at this distance so maybe a army cleaning? and every days they regroup corspe and burn it for disease.

Nate

Still quite slow paced, but the MC is becoming more reliable, at least...

Matt S.

The story is starting to be really nice, now that the pace is up and the MC a bit more used to everything. I personally hope that meeting whoever lights that fire will turn into a nice and straightforward co-op to figure out this world and not a backstabbing thriller of doubt and betrayals. Honestly prefer having two or more characters that are different but comlementary, like the Zach & Zorian teamwork in MoL. But it's your book so of course, do whatever and I'll give it a chance. :)

The only beef I have with this novel is the low update rate

Yshua

Thanks for the chapter! It’s easy to forget just how many chapters it takes to build the sort of world knowledge and familiarity that we have for the world of A.H. I find myself with so many questions here. Still following along :)

I've been mostly a silent reader so far, but just thought I'd take the time to let you know that I'm really enjoying the story so far. I love how Adrian is so different to Ilya and honestly, a little more believable too. As much as I want him to go charging in and levelling up its not realistic and nor how someone would realistically behave when faced with this. I also like your writing and pacing, its much more steady and builds on previous chapters than AH. I love AH but it is very fast paced and this reads more like a traditional novel. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and keep it up!!

Garend

Still not trying his luck with the Knight? I'm glad the pace is picking up a bit, the intro chapters, combined with the low update pace wasn't a good combination.

Bodoroo

Thanks for the chapter!


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