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Leaves of Terranthir - Chapter 12 Cleaning up

🕑 Added 2020-10-08 16:25:05 +0000 UTC

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Deinos

I finally got around to reading it :D. Nice story so far but very very slow. I had guessed you'd take this one slower to focus on the character since Llea is already DBZ level. I also much prefer a balance between character development/challenges to powering up. It's the struggle relatable to ourselves in the end that let's you connect with a story, however impossible the circumstances are. But atm it's a bit too slow for my taste, maybe in the same vein as Savage Divinity has become.

Looting Gormenghast for fun and profit.

G. Harthane

I know the pacing was very slow for ten chapters but it felt right to me. Currently looking through them to see what I can shorten and where I can make him a little less negative. It's probably a serialization thing too. With Azarinth there were complaints about certain sections of the story mostly due to the weekly releases compared to blasting through much faster with a book or already released chapters.

G. Harthane

Thank you :). Playing through it this October too. Currently stuck on Ludwig.

While I'm quite invested in Azarinth, this story has my interest as well. Thanks for the chapter.

Jacob

Thanks for the chapter, I kinda like the slower pace this story is taking looking forward to more

Stefan Mensink

So yeah, I'm reading this story now too. I'm sure it'll be interesting.

Endoria

I am not complaining about the email notification. I am complaining about it not being AH in general ^^

Jonathan Caselli

P.S. It feels weird getting a non azarinth notification from you. Will take some getting used too 😅🤣.

Jonathan Caselli

Thanks for the chapter. Glad to see the MC gaining some confidence and making progress. I feel like the time it took for him to reach this point is responsible, though I was starting to get fed up with his negativity and failures. That's mostly due to my impatience though. Can't wait for more chapters and I look forward to seeing where this goes.

McVerisimilitude

Love ya G!

McVerisimilitude

Actually this is kind of a nice surprise I only have one other story that publishes on Thursday and it's late in the evening. 🙂🙋

Jed Wolfgang

The previous chapters were release only as epub and pdf. You can find them attached at the bottom of chapter 11.

Erriballon

I can't find the previous chapters I can only see 11 and 12

Hayden Pech

I was so excited to see a notification saying you posted a chapter! Hooray! I love both stories and had forgotten about the Thursday Leaves chapter, woot! :) made my day

Knight Axel

Fuckin love this new story man! Wife and I are playing through bloodborne again and I can FEEL the vibe!

Boutross

Honestly you'll have more comments pretending to complain than actually complaining now. Oooh. I see what you did there.

Robert Mullins

You said it dude, that darn author ruins everythi- Wait, it's a trap.

G. Harthane

Ah fuck, I thought this was Azarinth :(


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