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Chapter 516 Mess

🕑 Added 2020-07-09 07:53:28 +0000 UTC

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Barrett Hess

I'm not used to characters bearing my name, it was quite the shock!

Daniel D.

It will give them pause in aggressing out of principle, but it could also cause them to lash out in fear, if they're the sort to use a pretext to crush a rival (and project that's what Ilea did).

Finally caught up with the story after a couple weeks. I suspect her destruction or at least interference with this Order will give some hesitation to Corinth once they get wind she's building her own.

For the record, I have really enjoyed these last few chapters. I love the occasional change in PoV, those are the chapters that get me to both giggle and cackle like a maniac as I anticipate the hammer dropping and all their preconceptions being shattered. With that, I do appreciate the change in pacing from it just being "Ilea the murder hobo trying to level as much as possible", those stories always feel much less "real" to me. (Not that I don't fall into the trap of wanting to see her murder her way to godhood, but these are the chapters I need instead of the chapters I want, if that makes sense). Also as someone mentioned above, I think the reason things feel "slow" is just because we are reading this in real time as you write them. From a finished story perspective I think you've got a really good pacing with these kinds of human chapters, if I was reading them all at once.

Adam Roundfield

Mopping up is always the most unpleasant part of any large conflict.

John Pratt

Yeah, I pretty sure Benedict gets it. I fell like Benedict has spent his whole life "whistling past Dixie." By which I mean he has spent his entire efforts on learning how to criticize entities more powerful then him in a way that doesn't get him marked for death. He spends his time criticizing the "State" of Baralia, which means he bitches about the rules, but in this world it means also criticizing actual people who can crush him like a soda can, to their faces. He's mastered both.

Daniel D.

Well, that's what Lys is for.

Chopper

It's a good thing Ilea found them first. If Hector was there he would have just drowned the lot of them and then collapsed the temple on their heads. But it also seems like Ilea is at her wits end dealing with these people. She's just one woman she can't continue to stop future rituals and make sure the people she left behind don't try to re-create the ones she destroyed.

Alsia

I wonder if Benedict has realized that he can't actually tell Ilea what to do, let alone make her. Last chapter he commanded her to halt, this one he's telling her to stop killing people. As if he actually has the ability to stop her once she decides to act in ways he doesn't agree with. Ilea following along is entirely her choice. If she agrees, maybe she'll listen. If she doesn't, then she'll just go "fuck it" and that'll be that. I'm looking forward to the "oh shit" moment (maybe as a PoV, or from Ilea's standpoint) when the crew realizes just what it means to be dealing with Lilith. Did she fully dismantle the ritual site yet, or is that the next thing on her list?

Han Pol

I think she started with 6 but has 18 or so by now.

Ato

She looked only at them now should be She looked at them only now

Andrew

Thank you!

Daniel D.

How many ash tentacles does Ilea have? I seem to recall that she found she could only control up to a specific number, but I don't remember what it was and I don't know where to look to find it.

HereComesTheBoom

If that’s the case it’ll probably be a montage, but I bet the people responsible for setting off the ritual will show up soon, the ones who ran away from Felicia’s group, and Ilea/Destroyer will take them down and unravel the whole thing from the top.

Chase Clawson

Excellent chapter! I really like these last couple. It's not the exactly the normal stuff, but it feels much more Ilea. Feels a lot like when she was in the capital during the war

Vegetables

+1. Have to agree. You need breaks from action now and then to build on the story. Maybe people feel like it drags because you have to wait a month or 2 for resolution. Though that is still fast compared to a lot of serials. Having reread the story, I was surprised how fast things like the Descent, Edwin's father arc, etc resolve when you dont need to wait for chapters.

Ranzbart

i dont share this sentiment that this chapter had no progression. It had plenty of worldbuilding, besides, having everything resolved in 10 chapters makes the story feel bland. I enjoy the details put into the story, this feels so immersive. why should the author timeskip this?

Dax

This mix up is even in the skill description for Space Shift too

Dax

It's an enchanted item she's had for ages but seldom used

Todd Kloos

I really hope we don't have to see Ilea repeating this process for a bunch of other cities. It isn't really that interesting to begin with, and will just get more boring and tedious if repeated.

carebear90

I wouldn't say, we learned nothing new. But I agree that not much actually happened.

Vegetables

...her water sphere.. What? Where did that come from? Where did I miss this? And honestly I think its good that this didnt evolve into another bloodbath. You can only do that so many times.

Vegetables

I don't know which is the best release date. Probably not Saturday because you have to wait 3 days for the next installment. Tuesday, probably because you get a double and only have to wait 2 days for the next episode. Thursday, no way we only get 1 chapter :( I wish I had the willpower to only read one a day, but no way I can manage that. I'm like a 2 year old with sweets. No I'm not advocating for a change to the schedule, unless it involves more chapters, haha. But then we need to give G.IleaThane some down time too. Or do we? ;) Thx for the chapter!

Straven

Thank you for the chapter.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Michael scott

Thanks for the chapter. This chapter was well named

Humans sure are fucked up.

Zir

before i forget again, you keep mixing up wield and yield. yield is to give way/concede. wield is to use something, like wielding a sword in battle.

Ghornet

That's some fucked up cult shenanigans right there. Such a waste of life..

Brian P.

Gotta love that "members if the order were sacrificed" bit. Like, yeah... sacrificed to warp the while city into monster, my dude.

Playful

What a mess. No clear cut beating up the bad guys to be found here. I'm satisfied with the job Ilea is doing though. Eager to see where this goes!

Garend

Another boring chapter where we learn nothing new and nothing happens.

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the very early chapter!

Hayden Pech

Woot! Thanks! And darn, now I don’t have something to read later today! Lol

Albedo's Ahoge

Wow, early today... Thank you for the chapter!


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