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Chapter 513 Alchemy

🕑 Added 2020-07-04 11:02:17 +0000 UTC

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levon

Actually like it more this way. There is actually development now. Agree that the cities are not fully developed and lack character, but now Ilea is not the focus of the workd. Shit happens with or without her and she chooses to get involved. For her own reasons. In my opinion, this is better workdbuilding than going from dungeon 1 to dungeon 2 constantly to get more levels. That is just boring

Pierre Steiner

This Lilith-Batman thing is a bit edgy and ridiculous atm if you ask me; it's way too pronounced and is made at the cost of a lesser world development. All that we hear about is Lilith, lilith, lilith the savior of humanity. Benevolent millionaire. Extremely powerful. Has idealistic view for what the world could be. Has no compassion for the lives she takes to free others. She's kind of a walking hypocrisy tbh. And that leaves no room to further develop the world. The cities are flat, Baralia is flat, the characters straightforward. The story is getting boring and repetitive, it has been for the past 50 chapters. What I liked in this story was the smash and level up mechanic, that despite being slightly repetitive had the merit of being entertaining. Now you've mixed in badly written politics and ideology, the quality of the writing in general has dropped too and it's just not engaging for me no more. I find myself wanting to hear more about Felicia than Illea, which is regrettable

Bobtur

Hey dude ! She ignited the owner’s head in previous chapter. You might want to change that !

Solarlancer

this might sound cruel but I wish that Ilea and Hector are to late to stop the ritual and everything goes to shit on a spectacular level and they have to deal with the consequences of their failure. And to make things more interesting they are late because Ilea decided to help the slaves and was helping people and Hector was late because he was to focused on looting

David Storey

Thanks for the chapters!

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

HereComesTheBoom

We needed the kind of break arc that we got, to consolidate all of Illea’s gains. But I’m not exactly excited about this whole war arc, it’s just humans being terrible to each other as usual. I was hoping we’d go south to the Library of Glass, I think that was the name, or west to explore the oceans and work on Illea’s drowning avoidance more, or go east and explore the elves and their relationship with the ancient dwarfs or meet more of the modern dwarfs. Being stuck on the human plains for what’s basically another round of the demon summoning arc isn’t that exciting.

Alexander Dupree

I don't completely agree because I think it's important to build up the world before we get to more action. The problem is the focus on the side chapter characters. They're fully fleshed out for everyone who's paying but not for people who aren't. So G is writing from that place where everyone who isn't paying for the side chapters has had zero investment.

Johannes Sauer

The last proper arc i realy liked was the descent. Of course i still liked most chapters, but not to the degree i used to. The only parts i loved was the Taleen visit, the class and a few individual chapters.

Rip Woodham

I'm sorry but.... But it's been really tedious and just meh ever since Ilea left on this side quest. It feels like we are getting less of Ilea than when you were only able to put out 3 chapters a week. Even if we are technically still getting more of her - which I don't think we are, it's all felt like filler.

Rip Woodham

I hope not ... that's a bad and unpleasant mechanic. And I have seen nothing indicative of it. Just because Sentinel has a nature like this, does not mean her nature has changed. She was given a unique class that reflects herself on the Azarinth path.

George Hicken

“prevent another such ritual to happen” -> prevent another such ritual from happening

Chad Hagner

Ty for the chapter!

Ghornet

She's never been known for her subtlety, but this is still some exciting covert action

Books McGee

I wonder if Ilia's class is changing how she thinks like the berserker ones, but it makes her want to help people. Might be interesting if that's the case

Andrew

Thank you!

Straven

Thank you for the chapters.

SoggyBiscuit

Is it me, or is Baralia kinda really similar to ancient Rome when it comes to itsattitude towards slaves and slavery? Senselessly killing your slaves is illegal, there are highly skilled slaves in trade, some people choose to free their slaves and keep them in their employ. Now I'm also actually curious how the slavery in Baralia has been progressing, as in, have there been reforms in the last few hundred years, like how Roman emperors introduced laws that were in the slaves' favor, such as an abandoned slave being a slave no longer and unjustified killing of a slave being homicide? Really like the nuance these last few chapters have brought to the world building so far. Keep it up author, proud of ya.

Julien Fellegara

In this story i realy don't care sides characters. So read them is boring for me. Nothing happen.. the story is like frozen arround this useless war. Meh :(

Ranzbart

"... both things the couldn’t read and ..." -> "things *she* couldn't"

MvA

I would find it quite fitting, if the ritual takes place, while she fiddles with her own ethics - she’s not been that long in such an environment and, to my assumption, lacks the trait and understanding of ‘sacrifice a few to save many’. This might make for an interesting character development

kak

It was probably Michael that killed Eve, so I'm looking forward to that confrontation. Otherwise I agree that they are not all that interesting right now.

kak

Apart from story pacing and convenience, I think it is diminishing returns. The undead in tremor or misstalkers might be hard to fight, but fighting only them reduces the xp gain. For fast leveling one has to constantly search for new and unknown challenges.

MacDB

This slaving fixation and moral jockeying is getting a bit tedious - just get to the ritual dammit, enslaved or not theyll all be dead monsters if you don't stop giving everyone you meet a lesson in ethics.

Heraclitus

I'll be honest. I really don't care about Felicia/Michael/Velamyr. My eyes just glaze over as they talk about inane politics and muse over their irrelevant personal issues. And I still have trouble remembering who is who between Michael/Velamyr. One is a general. There's gold powers. Duplicates. Blood stuff. But I couldn't say anything beyond that because they're kind of forgettable.

Brian P.

My guess is we've got three to five chapters left in this city. Gotta find the likely sites, investigate a few, kill some people along the way, free more slaves, meet back up with the pirate, banter with him, kill some more people, find the right site, fight those guarding it, fight the one or two really impressive post-300 guards, study it, and possibly get sucked into another dimension.

foldedcorners

Reading week-to-week is painful when the story arc is particularly interesting >.< I want to forget about this story and remember it again 1-2 years later like I did a few months ago.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter. Always so good :)

Michael Weis

Same.

Michael Weis

Ugh. Not a cliffhanger but close enough.

MountainFox

It just occured to me that one possible reason why Ilea started gaining larger chunks of exp might be due to the arcane battery incident with Baron. The energies channeled through her might have allowed for higher energy absorbtion, which might happily include whatever way exp gain works. It's a reasonable solution to the exp continuity of the story.

Michael scott

Thanks. Some very good stuff.

Tony Gilbert King

I wish i could forget this story so I could read it anew again from the beginning.

Sebastian Prue

Thanks for the chapters!

Vegetables

She's not quite there yet... And now I'm out of az healer to read again. Curses!

Null

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