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Chapter 508 A hunch

🕑 Added 2020-06-27 08:50:57 +0000 UTC

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L Pedersen

Feeeeeeeeed us!

Michael scott

Looking forward to next chapters. I bet Ilea wants to make friends with Nicholas just so she can level her divination resistance into the 2nd tier. What could divination resistance in the 2nd tier do? I'm thinking it lets you know a general location of whomever it is that is looking at you.

fennek

Nah, I liked the chapter. I think what made it feel different was that it was not just a pov that show ilea do things, but a pov to tie a plotline on the story, that we new nothing of prior. Otherwise it would have been some awkward conversation and telling of events from Charakters we now very little of. I think it works here. Atherinth healer ist one of the very few story's where I look forward to the capter every time it goes to another pov. Keeps it fresh, especially when ilea is just grinding away whole city's worth of wreak monsters.

Bobby B.

Well, that one was odd. Had a bit of a weird flow to it

Let’s be real, we dislike Maria because she’s dislikeable, not because of her actions. Everyone loves the pirate and he’s done far worse with less justification. Illea legitimately compared him to Hitler or Stalin, and he claimed he’d wipe out a city if they hurt (not killed) a member of his crew.

sharkattack

Means to an end. Word gets out and she gets hunt down again. This is just how "justice" works on Elos, like Helena's assassin guild. It is what it is. There's an anime called Shinsekai Yori about a society of superhumans and the dystopian measures they have to implement to keep it running, which I thought was pretty interesting.

lenkite

Maria is a fairly fast leveller in this world. She has put on 30+ levels (above 200) in just a little above 2 years. She will likely hit 300 within the decade. Frankly, many of the characters are levelling quite fast for 300 to be considered some unachievable holy grail. From the current story's progression there are probably hundreds of Level 300+ characters and a few dozen at Level 400. Either that or this generation is very, very special and the older generations (Hector, etc) were quite slow in levelling.

Sebastian Viller

Feels fine to me!

Rip Woodham

We the readers should have Ilea's perspective. It actually takes away from Ilea's perspective like this. Feels redundant and bloated.

FunkyCredo

The wording around Maria attacking her allies is very confusing and out of the blue. Furthermore Nicholas’ PoV in general is redundant as it eliminates all sense of mystery from the altercation between Maria and her group and it is immediately followed up by Ilea easily piecing together what we already know.

Rip Woodham

People shouldn't excuse Maria. That those two were directly responsible for what happened to her seems unlikely, but even if so she *planned* to kill Nicholas, a seemingly decent fellow just for being there. She may be redeemable, but right now she is scum.

Atlas Dwarf

I'd imagine Maria hates the entire nobility system given what they allowed/did to her and Edwin, so it's hard to guess her exact reasoning here.

Chopper

I assume Maria is using the war to take out people related to those responsible for capturing her. I'd say another scenario is she's just broken and kills any nobles she can find. I think these chapters were good and understand why the other perspectives were necessary. If we (the readers) had simply followed Ilea into this situation without any background, it would be more difficult to understand whats going on and why we should care about it.

Jonathan

I think that Ilea's ash was once a more wispy or fluid thing, and even her Ash limbs probably once looked somewhat sandy or grainy. However, she has so many 2nd and 3rd tier resistances now, she can make her Ash close to three times as dense as she used to.

Keifru

Those are some pretty neat art pieces. I had a completely different mental picture of the Taleen machines but those are so much better. Though I always imagine Ilea's ash as a far more wispy and fluid thing- though I suppose thats pretty hard to convey compared to some simple hard lines

Johann Franz

The part with Nicholas was a little strange. What's the problem with telling Ilea and Hector what happened. Just tell them one of his comrades went mad and killed another comrade. Why would Ilea and Hector even care without knowing any names? This way it seems needlessly complicated .

Han Pol

I very much like the story but I agree overall that it gets a few to many NPC's recently maybe not to bad and it's nice to get different views on Ilea from time to time, but personally I would prefer it if it is only a few characters so it becomes easier to relate, maybe an Inteligence or tactical officer who debriefs the different groups she interacted with, As this often felt pretty rushed and it gets kinda old after 20+ characters felt shock and ave from her.

Johannes Sauer

Maria doesn't strike me as someone who makes healthy decisions for herself or desires a healthy life

Jemini

That's what centuries of experience does for you, glad to see a writer doing wisdom and intelligence right. A little bit of "show don't tell" with the idea that he's seen a lot and learned a lot in his long life. A lot of past writers really didn't do justice to the idea of powerful and highly intelligent people. I'm noticing writers in general getting gradually better on that front.

Michael scott

Thanks for the chapters. I understand why Edwin likes Maria, their both major assholes. Why does Felicity keep her around. Is it just because she is friends with Edwin. Hoping Maria anoys Ilea so she can crush her skull.

BeepBoop

While I don't like Maria neither, I like how her existence shifts the scenes

Ivactheseeker

Plz don't split dialogues and scenes like that, it feels really weird when reading it. Otherwise, good chapters.

foldedcorners

Hector is exactly who Maria needed to meet. I hope she joins his crew so she can stop living in her horrible past and move on with her life. Having a tortured soul continue to pointlessly spread pain is a hard pill to swallow.

Joshua Little

Probably just centuries old and unheard of for a generation or 2.

TroubleFait

I really love The Destroyer more and more. He just caught the whole situation without trying, causing distress in both of them as they try to hide it. Just so he can annoy them.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Max Scherer

Ahh yeah never liked Maria. She is just one bitch....

Straven

Thank you for another batch of chapters.

PatronTurtle

I wanna hear Bob's story that made people think he was dead. Epic battle or hiding from debts?

Luciaron

Seems pretty normal after being tortured for years

Jonathan Walker

Honestly I fucking hate Maria always have you could totally kill her off and make me happy because of her. She is such a twat cunt bitch.

Itsurmom

When was the last time Blink leveled?

Cirex123

Bit confused about whats going on with the NPCs

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the early chapters!

Torbjørn Nilsen

Thank you for the chapters :)

Valter Anunciação

You're early today


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