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Chapter 507 Impressions

🕑 Added 2020-06-27 08:48:08 +0000 UTC

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G. Harthane

I'll check it out, thanks :)

Corwin Amber

there was definitely a section like that in this chapter.

K Hilliard

Thanks for the chapter! Had to reread the beginning a few times before I could figure out the POV, could use a cue at the start.

Thanks for the chapter!

I don't think her health is displayed correctly here, isn't it supposed to be 10x Vitality? Thanks for the beautiful chapter! Edit: I stand corrected.

Chase Clawson

Thanks for the chapter! Might recommend another line or two of dialogue before the transition to Nicholas btw. Seems like an unintentionally abrupt scene transition. Ilea comments on the look and position of the temples, then suddenly scene shift. All in all, an excellent chapter though!

Cyryl Chołodowski

Did you copy and paste part of an older chapter here? I feel like the part where Illea and pirate searched for treasure was already described before... and they had the same, or extremely similar banter.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Tony Gilbert King

Thanx for the chapter

Seiryus

It was moved from the last chapter. There is a new scene there now.

Markus

Yeah, that part with the treasure was in the last chapter too

Garend

Is there a secxtion from last chapter in here?

Nate

I need to sleep, but also, chapter....

Reid Palmquist

It's because he shifted things around so ilea intervened in the battle first before looting. Reread the previous chapter. There's some new content if you didn't read it after the edit.

Michael Buchler

I thought so too!

Boutross

No you're right Garbled Sounds, it's the same exact dialogue. Dunno if it's intentional. Maybe time magic fuckery? Or the author having a brain fart

Garbled Sounds

Is this a deja vu or have I read the exact same dialogue between those two before, in front of the treasure room?

Reid Palmquist

Bwahaha


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