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Chapter 506 Intervention

🕑 Added 2020-06-25 13:07:33 +0000 UTC

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Frederic Vincent

The new changes you've made flow a lot better than the original.

BeatleNerd

The amount of times I've seen the word "from" misspelled as "form" in this story is disconcerting.

The name drop time freeze at the end was a cool addition. I like how you're building the suspense to the 3rd class evolution. Waiting for it and also more evolution of skills, she's using the same skills for a few chapters now, hoping to see some (at least one) new skills or evolution bringing in a bit more fun every two or so chapters, hope you consider the suggestion.Keep writing and stay peaceful the pandemic is driving people nuts, understandably, we are social beings, so if you need to slow down please do so, don't let Patreon or your fans nudge you towards overworking.

just_a_potato

I get the feeling it has to do with the "Communicating her intent" part of Monster Hunter. If her intent is to be seen as Lilith then maybe that would do it. 2nd stage: You become better at communicating your intent. Infuse your voice with up to 100 mana to increase its range and effect on those that hear it. Fully infused, you may lure even powerful creatures towards your location, depending on your intent. 3rd stage: You may communicate even more intricate messages to monsters of all kinds. Infusing your voice allows you to imitate the calls of generally lower leveled monsters you have previously heard. Edit: Third tier Mental Resistance also gives her ways to communicate, we've seen Veteran react to Mental Attacks I think. Maybe that was also in there to help it show up as Lilith (still as a result of Monster Hunter though).

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Nate

I hope you explain how she got her whistle to display her name - was it as simple as just desiring it? More importantly though, what a sad world where the best response to nobles being weird is "ignore them and maybe they won't murder us"... ):

Nate

So sad. ):

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

Connor Bruha

That does sound fun, much better than the Great Salt where the only living things are demons.

Chopper

The story is great. Keep doing what your doing G and don't let anybody change you!

MrrC

....also isn't this her second time clearing a city of an infestation? Shouldn't she have received a notification of the other major city they cleared?

MrrC

Love the updates. It does however seem as if this tangent will take us into another "Great Salt" like arc. Everything from her staying to level her space sense to the fact that she can now see other worlds ....plus she needs a large number of high ranked opponents means that this story arc will have her somehow get into the insect universe and increase her levels through hard grinding against an entire world of highly ranked opponents. Would be awesome for her to do this and then pop out as level 400+ or even 500 after grinding in insect world for some time

Jemini

Better and far more simple fix. “Hold your ground. We will outlast them!” she shouted and summoned a wall to intercept an acid projectile flying straight at them. Reagan turned her head, curious at a strange new sound she was hearing. Almost like… waves?

"“Yess! It worked,” Lilith rejoiced and twirled once in a playful manner" Made the chapter for me, seeing Ilea's playful, childish manner after everything is fun and really lightens the mood

PatronTurtle

[Battle Healer] is because of [Identify] tier 2

Itsurmom

spells rained in form (from)

Venalitor

Wouldn't that be 8 core points? 50 per? Kind of poor return compared to a third tier skill and possibly the unknown uses too.

Venalitor

The system can now identifie her as 'Lilith' when she uses Monster Hunter? How. . . edgy. Her interactions with human strangers are just becoming more and more cringy.

"Battle Healer" is for people with Identify in tier 2. Tier 1 will still see her as "Healer".

The section with the Trakorov Rider class is a little disjointed, since the conversation is mixed in with a lot of unrelated exposition. Given how many core points Illea is getting, it might be worth dumping some into stat points. 16 core points = 400 stats, which doesn't seem like a lot... but that's a bit over 10% of her current stats. And she doesn't have to distribute them evently. 200 Vit/100 Int/100 Wis would be a massive boost to her damage, healing, and sustain, and she'd still have plenty of core points left over for 3rd tier Valk skills. And she'll get plenty more as she levels up toward 400-500.

Rip Woodham

I really enjoyed the part with the Imperials. Nice to see how they tackle the same thing, how they view Ilea, for her to make an impression etc.

foldedcorners

I assume the tag changed to "Battle Healer" after she got her 3rd class. I don't remember if that was mentioned previously. I'm curious what ilea's perspective is for when she used monster hunter to proc "call of lilith".

Rip Woodham

Story has felt like a side quest for a while now and that feeling has just been getting stronger. With the Sentinels, coming off the Descent it was fine and it was still challenging to create what she did. Ever since getting the 3rd class however, story has felt frankly lackadaisical. Which is quite odd coming off the long anticipated 3rd class. And now there's been this city clearing with Pirate. We were even told this was a side quest, and we've been getting the other perspective. That wasn't necessary.... even if what's in these cities isn't a threat to her, it still could have felt great. I haven't been feeling the atmosphere of these cities at all, or feeling what it would be like to face waves of monstrous insects and cursed humans. It was presented as a side quest and it's definitely felt like one, and that's a shame. By extension her 3rd class has started to feel like a side story or just a new toy. I know it's not. I know how powerful it is. But writing sets a tone.....

Ivactheseeker

“Hold your ground. We will outlast them!” she shouted and summoned a wall to intercept an acid projectile flying straight at them. Reagan turned her head, curious at the sudden sounds. Almost like… waves? Which sounds? This feels like a line is missing. She's reacting(curious) to something it was not mentioned. maybe something like: “Hold your ground. We will outlast them!” Reagan shouted and summoned a wall to intercept an acid projectile flying straight at them. Among the confusion, she heard a whooshing sound coming from the left. Almost like… waves?

Chad Hagner

Thank you for the chapter!

Michael C

Love her customizing her powers

Seb

I don't think so, but for the sake of argument, my guess is he's lvl 371. Since he's a higher lvl, he'll level slower

BeepBoop

Considering that one of her resistance text called her a slut, I think they are way past first name basis

BeepBoop

Rhaegar

Sebastian Prue

I agree with the changes immensely, it reads much smoother and get just going off to do whatever was very odd

Andrew

Thank you!

Chase Clawson

Another good chapter! I do have some constructive criticism (I think at least, just ignore if you don't want it, mostly just vocalizing my thoughts here in case they can help!) TLDR:This arc feels weird because Ilea is getting her usual power spike in a very non-ilea way (imo) During this arc, I've noticed that the enemies themselves have been a lot less memorable to me than in the past. Now, this may be because I only recently caught up after binging the whole thing (and thus this is my first time being within a monster grind arc as it came out) but I think it's because we didn't really get much time with Ilea fighting the creatures themselves. The massive level difference and the nature of these fights (easy city clearing, as opposed to a skill/level grind like before) has made the fights in this chapter much less interesting, and thus I may not be retaining as much about the enemies. To be fair though, it seems the focus has been less on the grind itself this time, and more on the Destroyer, and that may be the main reason. It's probably why the levels feel so much different too. Ya, she's probably getting a lot more exp than usual cuz she's finally killing things with high levels in large numbers, but that's VERY different from her usual style of moving on to more challenging fights. She's always been taking the hard road with the levelling, and it feels kinda off for her to be cool with just doing a boring easy "clear 10000000 of this super easy mob until you level" rather than "continue to hone your skills against this far more powerful mob until you beat it, then go until you can beat it with ease". While it might make more logical sense, it doesn't really feel as Ilea to me. Anyone else's thoughts? I know I have a small essay here, but would love to hear how other people feel about this stuff :) and I am still loving the chapters!

Corwin Amber

Enjoyable addition at the end :)

I like this theory could be correct one even.

Michael scott

I think Ilea was a little jealous when the system called Hector "The great destroyer ". She intentionally made her monster Hunter skill identify her as Lillith.

sharkattack

Order of Truth seems to be wood magic healers, their patron entity an extraplanar wood and/or space creature. I guess they're aiming for terraforming their territory and summoning it?

Valter Anunciação

Much better ending to the chapter

Ivactheseeker

Around 373 would be my guess. They're gaining experience roughly equally. Is it THAT important to know the exact number?

L Pedersen

I had the same thought.

just_a_potato

Nope, from Chapter 475: The Ashen Sentinel is both protector and destroyer. Wielding powerful ash magic, they are unpredictable and prepared for everything. Unwavering and ready to meet death with weapons drawn, they instill fear in their enemies and confidence in their allies. With minor healing spells and high regeneration, these warriors are difficult to take down. Ambition and drive may lead you to reach the same heights Lilith herself has reached.

Reagan - self inserted much? Lol Thx for the chapter

L Pedersen

Ilea has now reached the same level as Hector had when they first met. I'd love to know how much he has gained from this, if he's gained as much as she then maybe he'll hit 400 before her. This leveling still feels fast to me, I still remember when she spent months and months in tremor grinding mobs every day. I know this is different and she's much stronger and able to kill more mobs now, it still feels "rushed"

Ghornet

She's a bona-fide legend now. In the system til the end of time probably.

Corwin Amber

'let alone face them' face -> faced

Corwin Amber

'rained in form' form -> from

Albedo's Ahoge

RIP cursed Baker.

Mislandor

Those last few lines, from that last point of view - perfect! I love how it has changed from "call of a powerful healer" to "Call of Lilith", thank you! Great start to my day.

MrrC

Hmm - I think some of those monster bodies would be great gifts for the Vultures.....undead rock beetles etc would be fairly awesome defenses

Tommy Littlefield

It’s cool that she’s been system recognized now

Thransk

Is the first time we have seen the system acknowledge Ilea outside of her own personal interactions that wasn't entirely intentional? I know she helped with the classes, but that was her goal. This seems like she has so much power that the system is being warped by her personality.

MrrC

Thanks for a great chapter.

Looks like Ilea is getting famous enough that the system is on a first name basis with her most well known name now.

Oxylus

The Call of Lilith. Love the change and how the system recognizes how wide spread and powerful that persona is. Annnnd now we know she did it herself. Annnnnnd... [Battle Healer] is another nice change. Maybe people will think twice when they consider mouthing off.

Tony Gilbert King

No I'm definitely first

MrrC

first


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