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Chapter 485 The Three Shadows

🕑 Added 2020-05-26 15:30:32 +0000 UTC

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Matthias

gonna be difficult, since they have the same tendency to blow up as centurians. but I think ilea my be powerful enough at this point to either rip out the power core of a centurian (prolly the thing that detonates) and keep the rest of the body intact. maybe even preserving the power core itself. that would already be a huge upgrade for Aki

Lomie0

I object to this HUGE ass paragraph.

Albedo's Ahoge

I hope Ilea can grab a Praetorian body for her talking knife , Aki.

fbt

Lol, *someone* somewhere will object to anything :) TY for the chapter. While it was a deadend, simply due to how Elos works, it's nice they gave a solid try at doing runs together, and that they stopped as soon as it was obvious it was ineffective. If they hadn't tried it would have been a gaping hole given their relationships. I do appreciate the char dev of both Ilea and Trian; over this many pages and experiences they've both grown wiser. Ilea has become an interesting blend of wisdom and childish enthusiasm; it's kinda charming. In an early chapter there's a bit where someone is lecturing her about how dangerous and blah blah and she just smiles and goes "but I love it!" Pretty much quintessential Ilea; I should have bmarked that bit. Note: some unnec passive voice, e.g. "The attempt was stopped and she instead used the enchantment". Infinite # ways to avoid that (e.g. "she switched to ...abandoning Y..." or any other variant that doesn't use a verb of being). This is merely a style issue, not a grammar issue, so "you do you" as they say. But passive voice can creep in because it's easy, and it is generally regarded as something to use sparingly (if at all). Probably the single most common feedback of any writing coach or instructor or beta reader to any writer ever I suspect ;) Just mentioning it as it's easy to overlook, and there's a fair amount of it in AzH. Thx for the update!

Adam Roundfield

Up down over and through, back around, the jokes on you.

Chopper

Returning to Dawntree at last!

Sean Robbins

lol forgot all about that!!! 🤣🤣🤣 its going to be funny when he asks for it and she doesn't have it 😁

Sean Robbins

there dead. check the side story

Alexander Dupree

I thought experience was dependent on perceived danger? They're more than 100 lvls lower and don't have any real healing

Robert Mullins

I think it comes across this way largely because the last couple chapters have basically been a form of fan-service targeted at the discord channel. People who don't use discord wouldn't have seen it but there's been a massive amount of discussion over the past 2 weeks over exactly how 3rd classes work, how the different skills she got work, how it levels compared to her normal classes and all this other stuff. These chapters were purpose built to address that fan discussion and trian in particular was used to represent the discord channel by asking ilea to test all the things that have been discussed by the fans. I think it's completely fair to see that as a slowdown because we did spend a lot of time on those tests but it was quite intentional and I suspect it will be over now. Drop in quality? That's more subjective but I would argue it's less a quality drop and moreso that these past few chapters had a very different purpose and target demographic than the usual ones. As I said, this should be over now as we've moved past the fan-service style testing. Also, this is the last week of the authors civil service requirement so he'll be back to something like his pre-march schedule pretty soon.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. I wonder if her old friend will ask for his bow?

BurnNote

"Ilea used Force to slow down the pompous being" Ponderous, probably

Pierre Steiner

The last few chapters have felt like kind of a break on the authors part, it felt less well written and I'm not sure but it feels like there is a lack of inspiration too. If you ever need to take a creative break, go for it man. If you need some time to think your arc through, take some time. And if the rythme is too high for you to pay as much attention to style and how you write, I'm all for you slowing down the releases. Anyway those were just my two cents and I still enjoy the story very much, so it's just me being picky, don't mind me too much ^^ thanks for the chapter!

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

That drake is the Elos form of a dodo. Flightless, unintelligent, plump, weak, vulnerable to explorers... nearly hunted to extinction...

Worldknower

I'd also like to see what happened to Roland and Lily if possible :P

Worldknower

Her going back to Dawntree would be a perfect time to catch up with Jasper or Lorcan Agor. Or even Alice.

The 49th Khan

It would be kind of funny to meet up with someone who knows her and have new powers. They see her using the white flame and space magic, "Did you change classes?" Ilea just smiles. "No."

Ross

Did I miss something about her Identify skill? How was she able to see the level of the Reaver when it was 30 levels above her?

Dax

Alice. And there are a few side chapters from her POV at the $10 tier.

Alsia

Thanks for the chapter :) Is she finally going back to Dawntree? If so, I'd love to see what happens when she meets the people that sent the (admittedly weak) assassins sent after her so long ago. I can't wait to see people's reactions to the "weak" healer they've been looking for all these years

Blaublue

Thanks for the chapter. Was a good chapter where the skills were shown and things such as range-increases were mentioned but not the focal point Trian expecting 2-3 levels from defeating a lvl 383 as 2x lvl 250s seems a bit high

Nate

Ah, is that what it is? Thought she was just being weird, but I've done that sort of thing in WoW haha.

sharkattack

Dawntree hype :D

Acquiles Vitorino de Melo Graça

Let's see if she can get blast resistance to third tier with these guys exploding this time.

Michael scott

Thanks for the chapter. I can't remember the girls name, but the one she gave the grass to should be there.

Daba

another wonderful chapter, and the return to one of the first dungeons!!! WOOOT

Thanks for the chapter!

MountainFox

So she's gonna retrace her steps to power with her 3rd class. Very zen.

Hayden Pech

Thanks for the chapter!

Hayden Pech

Right? I was half expecting her to tame one. Not that it would be worth riding it with how much better her wings are

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Chase Clawson

Thanks for the chapter! I kinda wanted her to go ride a Drake, but I suppose nothing can compare once you've had a Trakorov as a mount

Oxylus

Nice

Matthew Robinson

Thanks for the chapter.

Lockwood

Thx for the chap!

Alex C

Thank you!


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