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Chapter 670 Ice

🕑 Added 2021-03-20 11:45:41 +0000 UTC

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Shaoraka

I ... guess ? no yeah you're right, I just read it as close to reaching 1000 but no I'm just dumb. Thank you

Spark

what? closer to 1000 could also mean 1100.

Shaoraka

4 marks and yet below lvl1000 ? I thought four marks were above 1000.

John Phipps

This writing is exactly why I am reading. Thanks

bob barker

Sharpening chapter divisions is a bad thing, and there's no need to cater to readers with serious memory problems.

WannaBeATree

How come they could teleport Ilea if even meadow can't do it with her space resistance up? (“You are suitable,” the last one whispered in a quiet tone. “For the Path of Death,” one more teleporting Ilea back into the first hall where they were before.") Non-space teleportation? I imagine she would comment on it either way, but it was kind of ingnored.

matthew gilley

When starting a new chapter make sure to not to startout with pronouns. Pronouns are refferences to ppl previously mentioned in the chapter. I know its still the same convo last chapter ended on but its an editing / writing nuance thing that helps prevent confusion amoung readers and sharpens chapter divitions.

Skyler Simmons

Not if they were just frozen bodies. Most likely they were raised on the spot

Nate

"embered heart flashing out in a sphere, burning through the flying form of the whispering lich fragment as it wailed in pain. Ilea watched a shadow fly into the frozen walls, the two shining blue eyes staring at her from within. " Maybe it's just me but I had to read that a couple times before I realized Ilea punched it out of it's body and it hid in the wall.

Hayden Pech

“collided, a bright explosions sending the creature back into the” “collided, a bright explosion sending the creature back into the”

Andrew

Thank you!

Endmor

thanks for the chapter -- Ilea decided no to comment > Ilea decided not to comment

Tim

Ordinarily yes, but just like she couldn't see the cavern within her Dominion, there is some skill or other aspect of either the Liches or the dungeon, that is obscuring the levels

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Martin

Unexpected challenge by ancient frozen undead guardians! For a moment I thought Arthas will appear to curb his underlings :-) Ilea is quite confident that nothing wrong happens in alternative trials

Camelopardalis

Love your world building! Fix “a bright explosions”.

[Undead Warrior – lvl ??] [Undead Python – lvl ??] When identifying monsters at lower levels than herself, it should show their level, no?

Njordt

Fighting an undead wyrm in an arena lead by a lich, this is why i'm here!

Matthias

the undead creatures should be identifiable for ilea, right? especially the undead warriors and the undead pythons

joseph mcgowan

Praise The Sun!

Etez

Thanks for the chapter ^^

Thanks for the chapter <3

StonedKnight

Thanks for the chapter!


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