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Chapter 608 Follow the White Rabbit

🕑 Added 2020-12-01 12:08:47 +0000 UTC

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The Path

Yo team Kyrian here to say we welcome him back with open arms.

The story line isn’t closed, as the main character isn’t Eve’s only friend. It’s setting up for some otherwise meaningless political drama and interpersonal issues.

Just Ask Cless, "Where is real body of Michael?" One or two paintings later, Boom! The end. Ilea needs only one clue, and Cless has powerful divination magic.

Playful

Ugh Kyrians coming back soon? Boooooo, fuck Kyrian. All my homies hate Kyrian!

Johannes Sauer

I wonder if Michael will become a creator at 300. That would be op and would wreck clairs plans for an economic war Hell clair would likely loose that war. Also im pretty hyped that we are finaly back to some dungeons and leveling.

Siggmundur

I liked these past two chapters enough to make my third comment on this story. I love these two chapters. I'm in the beginning stages of reading Azarinth Healer for the third time, and now I can barely wait for the Shadow's Hand arc, and Ilea's near shut-down after the Pretorians nearly killed her.

Falxie

I liked it. those srorylines have to be closed at some Point and how would there be some awesome stories in those parts anyway? Cant just make eves killer a 1000+ lvl dude.

Rhain

I think it made a lot of sense. Suddenly learning who the killer was and having all sorts of conflicting emotions in your head . Then finally having the time to let it sink in right as she sees Tiran, one of her most trusted friends and past party member with eve. That would make anyone crack even just for a second

Rhain

I agree with the ball, but I think it was in her character to let him go. Right at the start of her learning what the Lilly was I belive she mentioned that she would decide if she would take revenge or not based on if the organization was inherently good or bad. And with the exception of the pirate and what's his face who owned the fort, she has had positive experiences with the members of the organization. Also with her now knowing it was a eye for an eye type of deal, she wouldn't be forgiving but maybe understanding. Especially since he did save her friend not too long ago.

Drew Ewing

i’m just not a fan of these two chapters. all that slice of life buildup to the ball, and it would have been perfect to see Ilea interact with some higher powered humans both in level and other sorts. also not a fan of letting the michael clone go, it’s not very Ilea and i get why she didn’t, but Feyrair is with her. michael has no clue he’s with her, she could have just had feyrair kill him and no one would expect her. she could even have an alibi.

acrasa

Really disappointed in the last couple of chapters. Eve's story line ending like that and so abruptly was not enjoyable to read and diving right into the next old story line (kyrian) just feels like you want to close story lines fast.

Rip Woodham

I think everyone thinking Iana's question about Ilea's space magic is a mistake is missing something. Read what Iana asked again. She was asking if it was from Meadow. Ilea never explained what made it possible for her to get a space magic class before. You could say she got it from the Fae, but Iana does not know that. So she asked. I think it's natural since Ilea introduced her to a 4 mark space mage to wonder if that is the source of her space magic.

Håvard

Yes

Melting Sky

It's hardly the fact he has clones that makes him untouchable. It's his connections and the fact murdering him will bring Lilly down on everyone and everything she ever cared about.

Andrei

Hopefully. As a three mark Michael will probably be very careful about attacking her

Andrei

I quite enjoyed these chapters, but what bothered me was Ilea first being unable to cry in the previous chapter and now crying in front of Tirian and students. Weird behavior

Nate

“Space magic… did you learn that from Meadow?” Iana asked. But wait, hasn't she seen Ikea's space magic back when she was setting off intrusion alarms in their secret lab?

Melting Sky

500 is a long, long way away. What could she possibly even use to grind to that level other than Taleen? People talk like she can just grind killing low level monsters for a few days and get there when the reality is she needs to kill a medium sized army worth of lvl 600+ enemies.

Seth Richter

Im not a huge fan of these latest chapters, tbh, for similar reasons that others mentioned. I was really looking forward to the ball, to ilea being in a new situation and interacting with people who are at least close to her level...and the ball ends abruptly without any new characters or actions at all, just to go back to fighting taleen. And all because of eve, a character I haven't been emotionally invested in for a few hundred chapters, and who's arc I honestly believed was completely wrapped up when ilea decided to join the lily rather than eliminate them.

fbt

overall these two chapters seem really well done, quite a bit better than we'd been seeing (no offense meant!). The emoting is clear w/o being overdone, the chars complex, and it seemed fresh and exciting (despite very little "action")...that's good writing! GJ!

fbt

yeah, Iana's line was a bit immersion breaking (and that's a godawful bit of hollywood cliche anyway, even if used for humor like this).

Alsia

Thanks for the chapters :) Looking forward to the new arc!!

J H

YESSSS finally finding Kyrian!

Alexander Dupree

We’re in lol ok hackers movie

Tatsu

Thanks for the chapter! Though I have to say I am not really a fan of how these two chapters went. All that slice of life and buildup with the nice celebration at the end just to get blown apart by that "revelation" without anything else even happening besides that (Could have had that talk in a back alley somewhere for all it matters). That together with the convenient fact that the single human in all the planes to make clones is the murderer and can't be touched because of this is just making this incredibly unsatisfying. You are the author and I would guess by design I don't like that development one bit, but going from an slice of life part that ends horrible into a grind fest is just not to my liking so I will take a pause at the very least.

Andrew

Thank you!

MacDB

Wow this arc is going to be great, llea will probably hit 500 and find kyrian hopefully

Maradrax

I get not making old plot lines dead ends but it should have been followed up on ages ago in my opinion. When both characters were still relevant. Speaking of long dead plot lines, how about that guy protection Claire? Bring him up now would also be rather weird. Maybe he could have worked with the ball but his exclusion from such events means he isn’t a noble. So I got know idea his he’d fit in.

Maradrax

Honestly as the reader, Eve and Kyrian were so long ago that to bring them up now is a bit weird. I no longer really have the same connection to either of them, and Ilea’s continued reaction to Eve’s death is weird to me. She’s nearly started a massive war over someone she hardly knew. She’s also seen way more shit and had way worse shit done to her over the past 2 years.

And now looking for Kyrian (and maybe Zoe) is going to stand in the way of getting to 500 :(. Wish it cold have happened after that milestone

Luciaron

Thanks for the chapters! It would be fun if they found Zoy out there

Jed Wolfgang

Finally going to get our boy Kyrian!! I’ve been waiting for this.

Martin

Very interesting developments, liked the varying reactions to Ilea's mental state. It was first time after long time we saw Ilea react like this, it adds another dimension to her character. Hope she can find another person like Eve to care for. Looking forward how the frustration will translate into combat - either recklessness or just pure drive

CryoHydra357

Will her anger give her the motivation to reach level 500?

Thanks for the chapter! Seems like the beginning of the Key Seeker Ark.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

evyatar

Damn, until level 500 eh? Probably twenty chapters

The other DB

Thanks for the chapters, I'm looking forward to the next arc.

Sand

Thanks for the chapters!

Sebastian Prue

Thanks for the chapters!

Rick White

Thanks and I liked it.

Vegetables

Thanks for the chapters!


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