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Chapter 606 Noble Things

🕑 Added 2020-11-28 12:27:39 +0000 UTC

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bob barker

Michael killed Eve? seriously?

fbt

honestly, I'm kinda looking forward to Fey impressing the other elves w/ his mad cocktail skillz (insert old tom cruise video here...not the crazy shit, no not that crazy shit either..or that..or...dammit, yanno, the drinks thing!). Sheesh. ;)

Hunter Dupuis

tbh I would have preferred to see this chapter in another persons perspective, because we already know that Ilea doesn't really care what people think about her and we don't really get much out of this chapter. Would have been a good world building opportunity to include other factions reactions and thoughts about her.

Seb

I mean yeah, but I really hope that we don't go down a revenge plot. Sure, Eve was justified, but is it really worth going on a murder spree for? In that case she may as well murder 90% of the nobles...

bob barker

IMO the interaction between Felicia and ilea didn't seem plausible to me. Felicia used to share a considerable amount of affection with ilea, no? Despite hardening up for her military role, I'd expect her to have a bit more longing and emotionality when happening upon ilea again. That's not all that seemed unnatural, but that's a start...

bob barker

if the reader's mind isn't drawing the connection between ilea observing her environment and the progression of Identify, then their mind is lacking. If a novel is written for the lowest common denominator, then it's going to suck.

David

Eve killed people, but all of them we know of were justified killings. Michael not only murdered Eve in an unjustified killing, he apparently had known about the serial killer who Eve brought justice to, and did nothing to stop her from killing innocent people. Just on that alone Michael needs to be executed. And there is rarely just one cockroach. I suspect he is guilty of many other atrocities.

Ranzbart

the way its written doesnt waste words with 0 information.

Dominic French

Ouch, To tell you the truth I hope llea gets off the whole revenge train. Eve wasn't innocent, and she did start killing people. If llea began murder people for Eve's death it would probably get out of hand. I can't imagine she could only kill Michael and not have to kill a shit ton more people because she killed Michael.

David

It would have been better if Ilea had identify level messages shown for several people at the party before the skill leveled up. The way it was written makes it look like it leveled for no reason. It also would have been good to know the levels of several people at the ball. Felicia, Velamyr, and Michael to name a few.

David

It would be funny if she asks him to find out who killed Eve in exchange for the notes.

Dominic French

Ok so Michael is just being pushy with her lol, or at least it feels like that to me

David

The clones have to follow the original's orders, so Michael did not order the clone NOT to give her the resistance. But I'll grant that the original does not know that the clones gave her the resistance (unless it is in the notes). Anyway, that is the only thing that could be construed as payment in advance. Michael did promise to reward her after she brings him the notes. I believe he mentioned gold (of course), power, information.

Dominic French

I'm pretty sure she did that with a clone that was not actually supposed to give her the resistance

David

He used his gold magic to get her a resistance.

Dominic French

What is she getting from Michael again?from the way that last statement sounded he made it sound like llea owed him for something.

Thank you for the chapters! "She got up again and walked to the bar again, remaking her drink with considerably more scotch." the second "again" is redundant. Unless you're going for. "She got up again and walked to the bar, again, remaking her drink with considerably more scotch." But that still seems a bit overzealous.

David

It specifically said that she was not coming just last chapter.

She needs to start in private first. Going public is a nuclear, polarizing action that will just create enemies from potential allies. Convince the powerful first. Tell them about four mark Monarchs, that the elves they've fought are babies. About the other threats and the need for friends. They can help shape public perception. Waiting until she's a three mark herself will also give her words more weight. "Yes, I'm this badass and I'm still afraid. You should be too."

Alsia

Thanks for the chapters :)

Jac Onue

Not really xenophobia when all human interaction with elves consists of the latter killing entire towns for no apparent reason. The fact that elves eat humans doesn't help much either. If anything, Illea is the weird one, not everyone else.

Nate

Hmm. So I (and maybe Ilea, judging from the hastily dropped "sneak the elf in" plan) was under the impression this ball would be a much smaller thing. Though bigger makes sense if she got an invite a country over, haha. Regardless, I'm not really sure what she's doing here? It is nice to see Felicia again, of course. And Feyrair learned to bartend which I'm sure will become important later, haha. (Nah but it was funny. )

Nate

I will say I'm surprised she's not pushing against human xenophobia a bit more, especially for someone whose town is in the process of an alliance with dark ones. Tho that may just be my waning tolerance for real world racism influencing things, haha.

Chopper

It's not over yet.

Ranzbart

kinda bummed out that ilea didnt go "fuck this, youre coming with me" would be an aggressive way to push elven diplomacy

Wargen

Ilea's truest weakness is that she's a glutton

Very entertaining, as always! Just a slight thing that bothered me: The "Holy shit" in sentence 3 was somewhat sudden and without context. Thanks for the chapters!

Andrew

Thank you!

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapters!

Matthew Lester

I was hoping for at least one side conversation where the various nobility realize they dont have anyone who could even identify her level. Great work as always!

Aapjuh

i disagree with felicia being able to figure out what fey is as being to fast/easy, if anything it makes sense as elf's are the main sentients the human plains know about, everything else is hiding north and never comes down. she felt he wasn't human, 1+1=elf i agree with it putting felicia at risk, even with a mark its over when her throat is cut, ilea is fast, just not that fast.

Aapjuh

probably the reason identify leveled up, foreshadowing tier 2 allowing to hide 10 lvls every level or something.

Daba

your work just keeps getting better, i'm loving the depth your developing into the political landscape and not just focusing on the lvl related plots. Hope you never give up this amazing story

Brisyngr

Thank for the chapter. Normally i am not a fan of different povs, but a chapter with different people reacting to seeing her at the ball and their results of their identify would be nice to see. Also a bit more info on how high level all the people ilea is talking with would be nice.

Ivactheseeker

Nice chapters, interested to see where it goes. But the dialogue at the beginning seemed really weird to me. Felicia saying she does not want to know more, but then kept asking questions. And Ilea thinking she should not tell her about Fey ("Ilea trusted her but maybe not enough to outright share the nature of Feyrair.") and then proceeds to tell her about it. And about the portals. And Meadow. It's not the firs time that Ilea does the opposite of what she thinks, and it's jarring. (And Felicia figured things out strangely fast. Humanity does not know much about the Elves, so she should not know about the Domains or the Elves vs Taleen war) Besides, it seems really reckless even more so than bringing an elf to the party. Already Felicia would be the first target for anyone who has a grudge against Lilith -Ravenhall is mostly defended and it's not like the low level sentinels know much- so giving her too much knowledge just puts her and Ilea at risk for no reason. One can easily write entertaining banter without the need to reveal everything, as you've done many times in the past.

carebear90

I honestly hoped to see a couple examples of those seemingly hollow conversations amongst the nobility. I mean... it would have been like playing their social game full of traditions and unspoken rules, just to have a new player there who doesn't know or care about any of them. Could have been hilarious. I still imagine it was. But Ilea being bored and us seeing the scene through her in this case, I understand the decision of skipping that as she forgot the encounters as soon as they were over.

I have a feeling this downtime arc is Illea's last hurrah before 500. Once she's a three mark it's going to be impossible for her to be treated normally outside of a handful of friends, and that's something she values. You can just imagine the terror she'd be getting here as a ??? - we might enjoy it but I imagine Illea would be unhappy. And sure, I'm positive she'll ask the three mark healer elf about hiding it, but developing that skill could take years.

L Pedersen

I really hope some artistically inclined fan draws Ilea in that dress :>

Martin

Will we get to see the empress of the Lys?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Martin

I hope that something unexpected will upset the entire stuffy event and give Ilea opportunity to show off some of her skills

Martin

At worst hotel menu will be featuring a few novel meals for cannibals

Johannes Sauer

Goddamit its already over😭

Love it

Zarik0

:°°°))) Dam cliff

MacDB

She’s just leaving him in the hotel??? That’s just a disaster waiting to happen

Bobtur

Thanks for the chapter


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