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Chapter 334 Priorities

🕑 Added 2019-10-22 10:28:10 +0000 UTC

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Thernn

Fist->first Meed->met

Robin Sjödoff

Hi kind of new here, just wanted to thank you for a realy good story. It is one of the first that i just can't let go of whatever happens. Keep up the good work and I hope you have the power to never stop writing because this is solid gold.

searchnresqtoo

Stop being on time too. Be EARLY!!!!

Ties

Stop being late you're making me feel like a addict

PloofDoodle

some form of enchantment or something, will probably learn more about it when she visits the smith and his daughter.

Dominic French

What's up with the talking Dagger

Deinos

Nice, love it

Strange Loop Sleuth

Love it, can't wait for the reunion with Claire

Tim Deral

awesome chapter :)

Bob

"I make mythic bags of holding." "Why does your tag say Cooper?"

Michael C

I love she has the healer tag again. So.much fun with that

ArturScott

I feel like chapter 333 was unnecessary i've been waiting too long for her to came back and it was so short i'm almost crying)))) Thanks for the chapters it was good even if i'm junky wishes for more.

Nicholas Paterson

You'd think provoking unknown adventurers above your level in a city full of level 200 mercenaries would be a bad idea in general, but stupidity wins out I guess.

Jonathan Walker

I'm glad she went there first

Yaksher

This is the chapter I’ve been waiting for... though it would almost be better if the guy she threw out was at 200 instead, but nobody at 200 would be stupid enough to pointlessly provoke someone they can’t identify.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapters

Joppest

Feels good to be back in Ravenhall!

Grond (James)

I love seeing her compared to all the low powered people. How she handles herself and puts them in down when they are arrogant

Grond (James)

Haha, that would be hilarious!

J H

I hope after she catches up with Claire she checks out the highest level monster quests on the quest board and takes all of them at once, comes back after a day and says ok all done, any more? lol

Tetsuki

I think that makes it more natural. Who ever said Ilia is good at communicating?

Anghwrtais

Thank you.

Vallgar

Author, if you would allow me, there are two defects in this awesome novel that personnaly annoy me. One, author, I understand it's your writing style, but the excessive use of present participle tense without a pronoun and an auxiliary is irritating. More often than not, it makes Ilea’s battles hard to follow. I often find myself having to read the previous lines again to understand what exactly is going on (it was the case specifically during her battle against the squad of level 300+ Feynor). Second, when Illea talks, she jumps from an idea to another with no logic or link between her sentences and with the same redundant participle tense usage at the start of each sentence without a pronoun or auxialliary. Also when she is asked a question, she often answers with a question or she starts talking about a different subject before she veers back to answering the question she was initially asked. I find that unnatural and makes her conversations harder to follow.

Seb

I think that it is supposed to be 'meet'. As in Keyla is always the first person that Ilea goes to meet when she comes back to Ravenhall

Arkeus

Let's not get ahead of ourself there. First small step, like giving a Ilea corpse, before the big commitments like this.

BritishBob

"Ilea relaxed, closing her eyes and sighing. Finally, some space to breathe, “Just arrived actually, you’re the first person I meed." Meed seems wired. Looked it up, seems like it could work but I don't think it fits with Ilea's speech? Thanks for the chapter.

Would be mighty nice of her to get Maro a permanent reservation too.

Thaabit Rivertree

Nice chapter

Knyko

While i loved the north arc, its good to finally check back in with all the people i missed down south


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