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Chapter 360 The Vultures

🕑 Added 2019-11-21 09:39:56 +0000 UTC

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L Pedersen

*Checks the date* No, it is saturday...

G. Harthane

Just Eyn (Ein previously). No Alice.

G. Harthane

Thanks for the feedback :). I answered some of it above but in the grand scheme of things I don't think either way matters heavily.

Rip Woodham

I think that's it. And it's only been mentioned a couple times. I didn't know until a reread.

Bobby B.

Who was Eyn? And Alice?

Lomie0

And that 5$ from so many people allows him to do this full time! Burnout was a serious worry for me while he was still working, now it's only a minor concern lol

Chopper

I have always been confused about the necromancer's group name. I recall Walter referring to them as the brotherhood at least once, so is the full name something like; The brotherhood of vultures? I apologize for my horrendous memory.

Sebastian Viller

Fuck I love Weavy so much. Maro/Weavy = Marvy ship in full force. -“About your summoning. I’m interested to see the runes you use.” “Your mind will crumble as you look at them, human.” Weavy replied. The necromancer smiled brightly. “Exactly. So show me.”-

Books McGee

Thanks for the chapter, I like the revisions too

Zir

also her dps was a huge perspective shift, she should be charging her fire and destruction before engaging and trying to chunk powerful enemies instead of peppering them with her limbs+cinders. also a point blank fire attack+30sec destruction+1k health sac+ashen warrior active should be enough to 1shot anything below 500. 30 seconds to take out something 100 levels higher seems incredibly efficient imo, sure there might be some mana problems but it couldnt be that many because she could meditate as she channels

Jacob

I like the changes, and thank you for the chapter

Michael C

I like our relationship. You write. I pay. $5 a month is the price of an e-book. But I love the story so much its 100% worth it.

Michael C

Agree. I would suggest the nobel was humilitated. The guard smirked and the nobel tried to lash out and kill the guard (assuming llea wouldn't care about a lowly guard). She decided decided...fuck it.. And just killed the nobel. Maybe even a thought that she was doing a favor getting rid of a dangerous man

Franananachi

Ilea does seem more in character to me when killing the noble but its a bit confusing about what the noble was trying to do and who he was trying to hit.

Thernn

I heavily disagree with the rewrite.

Treim

Spoiler: At least in the most recent side chapter about her, she was in Dawntree being part of a revolution against the local nobility. In terms of timeline and her level it seems to be reasonable to expect her to still be there.

Alphafenrir401

I really want to know where Alice is the curiosity is killing me

Rip Woodham

I want to second that I really enjoy the little moments. Eating her meal on the rooftop, welcoming the guards back, sitting with the low leveled adventurer's in the cozy bar, etc. And it's good to see everything coming together, like Grond said!

Rip Woodham

He changed his preference in a side chapter, but anybody not reading them would think it a mistake, yeah.

Grond (James)

I love to see Ilea connecting all these people and groups. It's like she's leveling up her friends, and also getting rid of prejudices and dumb cultural patterns. Like healers only being allowed in certain orders. Minor point, Eyn used to be spelled Ein.

Rip Woodham

Thank you for the earlier chapters! Always glad to enjoy with coffee. I actually liked those parts better before you changed them, and don't think they make more sense. It feels like Ilea values life a lot less now, that's only normal and she's always had the attitude of only giving somebody one chance, which he'd used up before. Plus, why would he attack the guard? And in the other case, it was odd that it took so much but why would she hold back? Well, it's okay.... I guess. I do really appreciate you going back and trying to make improvements, definitely like that and don't want to discourage. :-) I had some criticisms with how you wrote Ilea's return talk to the Hand, but no criticisms here, just enjoyment. Except I wanted more with Eyn, but maybe next chapter!

Jonathan

... by some other method than by running a single ash tentacles through several of them at once.

Its always good to see Ilea connecting people, haha.

Deinos

Hmm I liked the first version better because it showed her character development and less vanilla pink glasses

PloofDoodle

Reminds me of Saitama with his punch series

Dembed

Nice of you to post the changes here. Now it is more believable on how Ilea needed more punches, she just used casual punches

Zerith

<3 *happy noises*

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Ikawaii

It pains me that you uploaded the chapters 5 min before my lectures start.

FrostyNips

Very nice


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