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Chapter 357 Sanctuary

🕑 Added 2019-11-19 14:40:05 +0000 UTC

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G. Harthane

Thanks for the notice :).

Yshua

I had a hard time with parts of this chapter, especially interactions between Illea and the spirit. Hard to tell what was happening, who was doing what. Consider an editing oss for clarity and flow?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Yeah I have been getting into those recently and overpowered mains have been a favorite of mine for a while though I started out reading a lot of physical books

What kind of books do you read? Some of my favorites are Pendragon, The Rangers Apprentice, Artemis Fowl and Ender.

Michael C

Honestly, I love the changes in pace. Slice of life is important in a long story. Lets you bond with a character. This is long enough tonreally understand her, to root for her, to cheer her on. I feel less passive and more involved in this story than any others.

Michael C

Omg omg omg. Finally Green gonna get it. I knew he was coming back. Hey. I recognize how hard you are working to pump out chapters. Unless you are Piers Anthony, it is hard to stay focused, to put so much down day after day. That said, I hope you never stoo. I hope you are making 10k a month or more and are chained to a laptop writing for the next few years. I dread the day you abandone us.

Well this morning just got a whole lot better

ArturScott

thanks for the chapter


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