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Book 2 Ch 26: We Can't Afford Mistakes Now

🕑 Added 2024-05-28 12:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Ste-Why

Great chapter! Two edit suggestions: "...drake-tear flowers, Mercedes’s favorite, which choked the life out of anything else that may have grown nearby had it simply been trimmed back or planted in a more subtle way." -> It seem the sentence should have ended with "may have grown nearby." The phrase "had it simply been trimmed back or planted in a more subtle way." seems out of place. Unless it's trying to imply that the drake-tear flowers choke the life out of anything more subtle than them? "...it suddenly swung open and Jacopo narrowly avoided hitting him." -> I assume this is supposed to be "Jacopo narrowly avoided hitting *it.*"

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I think we'll finally learn more about the mysterious gold masked person who offered the traitors their deal... I wonder if he's just a lackey or actually some kind of God himself?


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