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Ch 36: Doing a bit of flexing

🕑 Added 2024-01-22 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Wow. And I thought the Elves were fucked 😆 🤣

Dash Marley

Happy to help! It's really cool that you can edit these live! Also, I hope this isn't obnoxious, but when you changed the metal it became "a iron capped tusk" instead of "an iron capped tusk."

Seersucker

Good catch, thank you.

Dash Marley

Nice chapter! Flagging that the metal on Ryker’s tusks changed half way through “Ryker was a head and shoulder taller than the other orcs, which put Dantes at about chest height to him. His tusks were capped in iron points” and “He picked at a gold capped tusk with his index finger.”

thomas johnson

Maybe the boss might but I guess he had thought better of lieutenant then gradually relegated him to just an “orc”.

Seersucker

He'd have been willing to work with them, but the dismissal of whores and unwillingness to work with him on a compromise makes him unwilling to. Dantes was raised in a brothel and his mother was whore. He doesn't like when people are dismissive of them.

thomas johnson

I am confused when did Dantes become so honorable? He is supposed to be a realist who has lived in the pit for 5 years. He understands that the reason the changelings have received protection is because of their ability to change into any pleasing form, providing a service. He should understand that the orc's view of power would try to exploit the changelings like any gang would. Since the balance has been shifted, through his actions, this result is his fault. Weirdly it is also Syn's since she saved him. Still, Dantes understands the prisoner's code beating members of a gang he is allied with just because of the principle other times for fun. He should respect the orcs for taking advantage of the power shift that he created. They even recognize his value and wish to bring him into the fold as a result of his actions. Why is he not appealing to their power he could have the orcs intimidate individuals so that the changelings can recruit members for the orc clans by claiming their true names bestowing them a slave army or they could provide the orcs secrets from their clients. A little bt disappointed.


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