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Book 3 Ch 53: You Don't Leave Unless I Let You

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Kyle Pemberton

Excellent chapter, you have me all excited wondering what comes next.

Kitty Lee

Edit suggestions: "became a human woman ~~do~~[to] dodge under another attempt at decapitation" "the image he was seeing had ~~no~~[now] grown crystal clear with every blink." "changing them to daggers that ~~shout~~ [shot] out at his enemies."

Kitty Lee

Yay the wizards won their civil war. Glad Zak is getting his revenge 🍿

Maddie

Thank you! Was feeling a bit shit but this chapter was great ♥️👏

Nilbog

German supplex

Marine Psychologist

I love that he’s stealing greed’s strength with his thief’s blessing. It’s so on point that the theif isn’t one huge power but a bunch of little tricks that suddenly leave someone robbed or caught totally off-foot. I usually don’t hope for brutality (it’s often too easy to lean into) but I do actually hope he gets devoured by rats or something like that. Or somehow fed to the locus as a whole, nature and thief combining to steal its strength as fertilizer for growth of Dante’s and the locus. Really good chapter! Might want to make a second pass for typos at some point though.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Shelbo

Also this is a side (and funny) thought but when Merle drops to his low stance I thought of the “Triceratops Fist” stance from the BAKI manga

Shelbo

God I love Druids. You perfectly captured why Druid’s grooves and locus should never be trifled with. And I just realized that Syn is basically a Pathfinder Druid with the humanoid shifter feat and that she matches so well with Dantes. I wonder if Godfrey had some forces in the academy which is why the civil war took so long

Anthony Diaz

YESSSSSS JUSTICE FOR ZAK I LOVE ITTTTT

Anthony Diaz

Thank you for the amazing chapter


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